自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with accuracy, coherence and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two concise supporting details. Avoid errors in word choice (e.g., write → ride) and unclear phrases (what is “a pink 1”?). Use linking words to connect points (for example, but, so, because). Also limit your response to a maximum of about 3–4 short sentences for naturalness.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe for young children. However, three years ago I bought a pink bicycle, and now I often ride it around the city with my boyfriend. Because of that, I feel more confident cycling in traffic.

建議: Answer directly, then give a clear, specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Use linking words (for example, because, for instance) and correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., riding past me). Provide one concrete observation to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, when I walk along the main street near my office I often see dozens of cyclists passing by, especially during rush hour.

× No, I didn't because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for children.

✓ No, I didn't because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for children.

This sentence is already correct in past tense. It correctly uses 'didn't' and 'thought' to describe past situations. No change needed.

× But I bought a pink 1 three years ago and I always write it with my boyfriend around the city.

✓ But I bought a pink one three years ago and I always ride it with my boyfriend around the city.

There are two problems: the numeral '1' is used where the pronoun 'one' is needed, and the verb 'write' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'ride' for using a bike. 'Write' is a vocabulary error, not in the provided list, but 'ride' fixes the meaning. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'I always ride' is correct. Suggestion: replace numerals with words in spoken sentences and use the correct verb for the action.

× Yes, of course. I think bikes are very popular in my country 'cause when I when I am working in the street I can see many people riding across me.

✓ Yes, of course. I think bikes are very popular in my country because when I am working in the street I can see many people riding past me.

Problems addressed: unnecessary repetition 'when I when I' (sentence structure error) and incorrect preposition 'across me'. Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause' for formal speech. 'Riding past me' uses correct preposition to show people moving by the speaker. Also present continuous 'I am working' and 'can see' are compatible in present tense. Suggestion: remove repetitions, choose appropriate preposition 'past', and avoid informal contractions in test situations.