自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, sentence structure and fluency. Use a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one concise supporting detail. Correct negative form (use "didn't have"), avoid repetition and filler words, and keep the answer within 2–3 sentences. For example, say you didn’t have a bike and give a brief reason or alternative activity.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I preferred playing football with my friends, so my parents bought me sports gear instead of a bicycle.

建議: Focus on clarity, accurate vocabulary and sentence organization. Start with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Replace incorrect words like "exotic" with more appropriate terms such as "popular" or "common." Avoid hesitation and redundant phrases.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and to avoid traffic. However, they are more common in cities among young people who prefer cycling for exercise and convenience.

× No, I had not a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The student used 'had not' in a simple past negative context where English prefers the auxiliary 'did' with the base verb: 'did not have'. Use 'did not' + base verb for negation in simple past. Suggestion: say 'I did not have' for negative past statements.

× This is because I am I don't like bike.

✓ This is because I did not like bikes.

Sentence has multiple issues: incorrect pronoun repetition 'I am I' and wrong tense/number. The context asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'did not like'. Also 'bike' should be plural or count with an article; 'bikes' is appropriate when speaking generally. Suggestion: remove extra 'I am', use 'did not like bikes' to express past dislike.

× Obviously, yes, bike is absolutely uh, bike is exotic thing in my country and most of the individuals by this is because some number of people who are really who are preferred to bike riding.

✓ Obviously, yes. Bicycles are quite rare in my country, and most people don't use them because only a small number of people prefer riding bikes.

Multiple errors: 'bike is' should be plural or use an article; 'exotic thing' needs an article and clearer phrasing; 'most of the individuals by this is because' is ungrammatical. I changed to 'Bicycles are quite rare' (plural noun with verb agreement) and clarified causation using 'because' with correct clause structure. Also 'some number of people who are really who are preferred' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'only a small number of people prefer riding bikes'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, ensure subject-verb agreement, and simplify clause structure for clarity.