自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Старайтесь давать более связный и грамматически корректный ответ. Начните с чётного утверждения, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные причины или детали, избегайте повторов и исправляйте времена (прошедшее для детства). Используйте связки (for example, because, so) и максимум 3–4 коротких предложений.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous. However, I loved the idea of cycling and often watched my friends ride. For example, I used to borrow a bike occasionally when my parents weren't around.

建議: Отвечайте чётко и логично: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретных аргумента с связками (for example, because, therefore). Избегайте шумных пауз («uh») и повторов. Дайте точные факты или примеры (e.g. bike lanes, bike-sharing).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, so people often choose cycling instead of driving. As a result, cycling is a common daily commute option.

× Unfortunately not. I don't. I didn't have bike because my parents didn't allow me to have one.

✓ Unfortunately not. I didn't. I didn't have a bike because my parents didn't allow me to have one.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before the countable noun 'bike' and contains awkward present tense 'I don't' when referring to past. Use 'I didn't' consistently for past. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bike' to indicate past possession.

× But I love riding and I was just like bike, but I didn't.

✓ But I loved riding and I really liked bikes, but I didn't have one.

Tense inconsistency and incorrect expression. 'I love' (present) should match past context 'when you were a child' so use 'I loved'. 'I was just like bike' is ungrammatical; use 'I really liked bikes'. Also add 'one' to refer to a single bike.

× I didn't have.

✓ I didn't have one.

Incomplete sentence: 'I didn't have' requires an object. Add 'one' to make it clear: 'I didn't have one.'

× Definitely yes, because in my country, uh, most of the people, uh, prefer ride a bike instead of, uh, have a, instead of have a car and uh, uh, you can leave your bike anywhere or you can't, uh, rent a bike in my country and uh.

✓ Definitely yes, because in my country most people prefer riding a bike instead of having a car. You can leave your bike anywhere, and you can also rent a bike in my country.

Multiple issues: verb forms after 'prefer' require gerund ('prefer riding' or 'prefer to ride'); parallel structure demands 'riding a bike instead of having a car'. Remove filler words and fix polarity: phrase 'or you can't' contradicted idea; if renting exists, say 'you can also rent'. Use commas and clear clauses. Suggestions: use gerunds for preferences and maintain parallel structure.