自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently, make a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundant phrases. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences, use linking words if adding details. Be specific about the bike (type, age when you received it, how you used it) to enrich the response.

範例: Yes. I had a small bicycle that my mother gave me for my seventh birthday. I used to ride it around our neighborhood every day, and I remember learning to balance on the short trips to my friend’s house.

建議: Organize ideas and correct grammar: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / moreover). Use correct noun forms and smoother phrasing (e.g., ‘two-wheelers’, ‘traffic congestion’, ‘maintenance costs’). Provide a short example or statistic to support your point.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many people prefer two-wheelers because they are faster in heavy traffic. Secondly, they are cheaper to buy and maintain; for example, a scooter’s fuel and service costs are much lower than those of a car.

× When I was a child I have a cycle which my mom be gifted me on my birthday and I don't have a bike that big people used to start.

✓ When I was a child I had a bicycle which my mom had gifted me on my birthday, and I didn't have a bike like the big ones people used to ride.

Errors: 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'When I was a child' (tense consistency); 'be gifted' is incorrect—use past perfect 'had gifted' or simple past 'gifted' to show completed action; 'don't have' should be past 'didn't have'; 'that big people used to start' is ungrammatical and likely means 'like the big ones people used to ride'. Suggestion: Use past tense for all actions that occurred in childhood, use 'gifted' in past or past perfect, and rephrase awkward clause to 'like the big ones people used to ride' for clarity.

× Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country because here people travel, uh, in two Wheeler mostly because there is traffic too much and bike usually keep the traffic in, keep the traffic in good way.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country because people mostly travel on two-wheelers due to heavy traffic, and bikes usually help reduce traffic congestion.

Errors: 'in two Wheeler mostly' has word order and noun form issues — use 'travel on two-wheelers' (preposition and plural noun). 'There is traffic too much' is incorrect word order; use 'due to heavy traffic' or 'because traffic is heavy'. 'Bike usually keep the traffic in, keep the traffic in good way' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'bikes usually help reduce traffic congestion' to express the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use proper prepositions ('on two-wheelers'), correct word order for expressions of degree ('due to heavy traffic'), and a clear verb phrase ('help reduce traffic congestion').

× And also it's maintaining is too low.

✓ Also, their maintenance cost is very low.

Errors: 'it's maintaining is too low' is ungrammatical: 'maintaining' is the wrong form and 'it's' (it is) doesn't match plural 'bikes'. This involves incorrect word choice and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use a noun phrase 'maintenance cost' and match number: 'their maintenance cost is very low' or 'maintenance is low' to convey that bikes are inexpensive to maintain.