自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct word order and articles. Keep answers to no more than five sentences and avoid repetitions and filler words. For example, say you had a bike, describe it briefly (color, who gave it to you), and mention a short memory or how you used it using linking words (e.g., “and”, “so”, “because”).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a green bike that my father bought me when I was about eight, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. It was quite sturdy, so I learned to ride confidently and kept it for several years.

建議: Give a clear, direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitations and repeated words. Use linking words like “because,” “however,” or “for example” to make your response coherent. Also use correct vocabulary (e.g., “bicycles” or “cyclists”) and clear sentence structure.

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer small cars for convenience. For example, many families buy mini cars for commuting, so there are fewer cyclists on city streets.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The Examiner asked a past simple yes/no question 'Did you have a bike...?' The appropriate short answer uses the auxiliary did, not the past-tense main verb 'had'. Use 'Yes, I did.' for correctness. Suggestion: Answer yes/no questions with 'did' + base verb for past simple (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't').

× I had a bike when I was child, a child it it is.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Missing article and extra words create an ungrammatical sentence. 'child' requires the article 'a' in this context. Remove the repeated and misplaced words 'a child it it is' to form a simple past clause that matches the time frame. Suggestion: Keep the time expression concise: 'when I was a child'.

× It was green bike my father bought me.

✓ It was a green bike my father bought me.

The noun 'bike' requires an indefinite article 'a' and adjective order is fine ('green bike'). Also natural word order places the possession phrase after the noun: 'a green bike my father bought me' or more clearly 'a green bike that my father bought me.' Suggestion: Use articles before singular countable nouns and consider adding 'that' for clarity: 'a green bike that my father bought me.'

× I think my country bikers are, is are, are, are not popular.

✓ I don't think cyclists are very popular in my country.

The original is disfluent and mixes forms. 'Bikers' is informal; 'cyclists' is more natural. The speaker also needs a negative structure to express unpopularity. Use subject-verb agreement and a clear negative: 'I don't think cyclists are very popular in my country.' Suggestion: Use a clear main clause + complement: 'I don't think [group] are popular in my country.'

× Uh, because, uh, I, we have, uh, mini cars people.

✓ Because many people own small cars.

The original is filled with hesitations and incorrect word order. 'Mini cars people' is ungrammatical. Use subject 'many people' + verb 'own' + object 'small cars' to state the reason clearly. Keep tense present simple for general facts. Suggestion: Remove fillers ('uh') and use a simple statement: 'Many people own small cars.'