自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct response in the past tense, keep it concise (1–3 sentences), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition and unfinished clauses.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was very small. As a result, my parents preferred to give me rides or accompany me when we went out rather than buy a bike for me.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, therefore). Avoid repetition, correct grammar, and finish your ideas. Use concrete examples such as commuting to work or school.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are economical and easy to park. For example, many people use motorcycles to commute to work or to university since they save time in heavy traffic and cost less to run than cars.

× No I don't have a bike because I was too small that my parents are just look after me so they did not buy a bike for me because.

✓ No, I did not have a bike because I was too small and my parents were just looking after me, so they did not buy a bike for me.

Errors: mixture of present and past tenses and incorrect verb forms. The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so use past tense consistently: 'did not have' and 'were looking after'. 'Are just look after me' is incorrect: 'were just looking after me' uses past continuous to show ongoing past action. Also remove the redundant trailing 'because'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use past simple and past continuous where appropriate and avoid redundant words.

× Yes Sir, I agree with this statement My the bikes are very popular in my country because people are travelling.

✓ Yes, sir. I agree with this. Bikes are very popular in my country because people travel a lot.

Errors: 'My the bikes' is ungrammatical and 'are travelling' is a present continuous form that is unnatural for habitual actions. Use simple present 'travel' to describe habitual behavior. Also capitalize and punctuation: 'Yes, sir.' Suggestion: remove extra words, use simple present for general facts, and ensure correct article usage (omit 'the' before 'bikes' when speaking generally).

× People are travelling more often in the bikes and when they are travelling they will travel in through different sites like jobs, educational purposes.

✓ People travel more often by bike, and when they travel they go to different places for work and education.

Errors: 'are travelling' (present continuous) should be simple present 'travel' for habitual actions. 'in the bikes' is incorrect preposition and article; use 'by bike' for mode of transport. 'will travel in through different sites' is ungrammatical: use 'go to different places' and 'jobs, educational purposes' should be 'work and education'. Suggestion: use 'by' for transport, simple present for habits, and clear nouns for purposes.

× They used why Because they make are more convenient than car because they.

✓ They use bikes because they are more convenient than cars.

Errors: 'They used why Because' is incoherent and mixes forms. Use simple present 'use' for habitual action. 'make are more convenient' is incorrect word order and extra verb; correct form is 'are more convenient'. 'than car' needs plural 'cars' when speaking generally. Remove the trailing incomplete clause. Suggestion: form concise sentences using subject + verb + complement, use plural for general comparisons, and simple present for habits.