自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer grammatically correct, direct, and clear. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence (the question asks about childhood), then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid filler words and pronunciation issues (e.g., 'wish' → 'used to enjoy' or 'liked'). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it every morning and afternoon with my friends around the neighborhood. Riding helped me get exercise and explore nearby parks.

建議: Answer directly and clearly whether bikes are popular, then support your view with specific reasons and a contrasting point using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'popular', 'common', 'because', 'however') and avoid vague or contradictory phrases like 'it's worse'. Keep sentences short and coherent.

範例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people ride them in the afternoons for exercise and short trips. However, jogging is also a common form of exercise, especially in parks and along riverfronts.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The correct tense is past simple. Using 'do' (present) is incorrect. Change to 'did' to match past time reference.

× Uh, I wish bike biking in the morning and afternoon.

✓ Uh, I used to ride my bike in the morning and afternoon.

The original mixes 'wish' (which expresses a desire) and 'biking' incorrectly. For past habitual actions, use 'used to' + base verb or the past simple. Also use the noun 'bike' as object with verb 'ride' or the gerund 'biking' correctly. 'I used to ride my bike' is clear and grammatically correct.

× Yeah, with my firm.

✓ Yes, with my friends.

'Firm' is incorrect here (means company). The student likely meant 'friends'. Also 'with' is fine but ensure the correct noun. If they meant company/workplace, more context needed; in the context of biking as a child, 'friends' is appropriate.

× Of course it's worse because it's actually our habits in afternoon umm, otherwise jogging also the the common sport in our country.

✓ Of course bikes are common because we usually ride them in the afternoon; otherwise, jogging is also a common activity in our country.

Multiple issues: 'It's worse' is incorrect meaning and 'it's actually our habits' is wrong form and agreement. Use plural subject 'bikes' and verb 'are' for general statements. 'In the afternoon' needs the article 'the'. Remove duplicate 'the the'. Use 'activity' or 'sport' consistently. The corrected sentence uses present simple for general habits and clarifies meaning.