自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammatical errors, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use appropriate verbs (e.g., “ride” instead of “light”) and avoid repetition and filler words. Keep your response to no more than five sentences and include linking words to make it coherent.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me to help me stay active, and I often rode it to the park on weekends. Over time I became more confident and now I’m quite skilled at riding a bicycle.

建議: State your opinion clearly, then support it with specific, correctly worded reasons and examples. Avoid incorrect phrases (“oven areas”) and wrong verbs (“light the bicycle”). Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “therefore”) and keep sentences short and natural.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many cities have bike-sharing schemes and dedicated cycle lanes. For example, commuters often ride shared bikes to nearby train stations, which reduces traffic and is affordable.

× Yes, I had the bicycle when I was a child, child, uh, my mom gave me a bicycle to improve my physical skills.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child; my mom gave it to me to improve my physical skills.

The definite article 'the' is incorrect before 'bicycle' in this context because it refers to any bicycle owned then, not a specific known bicycle. Use the indefinite article 'a'. Also replace the repeated 'child' and combine clauses for clarity; use the pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: Use 'a' for non-specific singular nouns and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× And I usually go to the park, uh, and park this riding the bicycle.

✓ I usually went to the park and rode my bicycle there.

The original mixes present and past and places adverbs/clause awkwardly. The question asked about childhood (past), so use past tense 'went' and 'rode'. 'Park this riding the bicycle' is ungrammatical; reorder into 'rode my bicycle there'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with the time frame and place adverbs close to the verb they modify.

× And I gradually used to, umm, used to it and now I am very good at lighting a bicycle.

✓ I gradually got used to it, and now I am very good at riding a bicycle.

'Used to' should be followed by the base verb or the phrase 'get used to' plus noun/gerund. 'Used to it' is correct only after 'get' as 'got used to it'. Also 'lighting a bicycle' is incorrect; 'riding a bicycle' uses the verb 'ride' with -ing as a gerund. Suggestion: Use 'got used to' for becoming accustomed and 'ride' for using a bicycle; use gerund after 'to' when appropriate.

× Yes, I think so, because I usually see a bike sharing system in the oven areas and a lot of people light the bicycle to commute to the company and to go to the station like that.

✓ Yes, I think so, because I usually see bike-sharing systems in urban areas and many people ride bicycles to commute to work and to go to the station.

Use present simple for habitual actions ('I usually see'). 'Bike-sharing' should be hyphenated as a compound modifier and pluralized if referring to systems generally. 'Oven areas' is likely a typo for 'urban areas'. 'Light the bicycle' is incorrect verb choice; use 'ride bicycles' or 'ride a bicycle'. 'Commute to the company' is unnatural; use 'commute to work'. Suggestion: Use correct collocations ('ride a bicycle', 'commute to work') and check word choice ('urban' not 'oven'). Keep subject-verb agreement and consistent plurality.

× So I think the bike is a bicycles are popular in my country.

✓ So I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence mixes singular and plural ('the bike is a bicycles are') and is ungrammatical. Use a clear plural noun 'bikes are' to match the verb 'are' and express the general idea. Suggestion: Ensure number agreement between subject and verb and avoid combining singular and plural forms in one sentence.