自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Expand your reply into a short, natural response (1–3 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific details (when, where, or how you used the bike). Use a linking word if you add details. Keep it concise and avoid single-word answers.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my friend’s house and to the park every weekend, which helped me become more confident and independent.

建議: Answer directly and then give a reason or example. Use a linking word (for example/because/therefore) and provide a specific detail about how bikes are used or who uses them. Avoid pronoun ambiguity (say “people” or “many people”).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, we do.

✓ Yes, they are.

The examiner asked about bikes in general in the country, not about the examiner and student together. The student used the first-person plural pronoun 'we' which incorrectly refers to themselves and others. Use 'they' to refer to people in the country in general. Also match verb form: 'bikes are popular' -> short answer should be 'Yes, they are.' This fixes pronoun reference and subject-verb agreement.