自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and add a brief reason or contrast to enrich the response. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences). Use a linking word if you add detail.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bicycle when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived close by and we couldn’t afford a bike at the time.

建議: Make your opinion clear and avoid contradictions. Start with a direct topic sentence, then support it with one specific reason and a brief comparison using a linking word (e.g., "so" or "however"). Remove redundant words and repetitions.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer walking or using public transport because cities are compact and cycling infrastructure is limited, so cycling is less common than in some European countries.

× Well, I did not have a bicycle when I was a kid.

✓ Well, I didn't have a bicycle when I was a kid.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but can be made more natural and conversational by using the contraction 'didn't' instead of 'did not'. No structural error; suggestion improves register for spoken English.

× Well people over here prefer walking instead of using bike, so yes, bikes are not as common as as in different places, so yeah.

✓ Well, people here prefer walking instead of using bikes, so bikes are not as common as they are in other places.

Multiple issues corrected that match listed problem types: 1) 'using bike' is incorrect — countable noun 'bike' requires plural or an article; changed to 'using bikes' (relates to Article errors and Singular and plural issue). 2) Repeated 'as' removed and 'in different places' changed to 'in other places' for natural comparison (Incorrect comparison object). 3) Added 'they are' to complete the comparison clause and ensure correct sentence structure and clarity (Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: use plural 'bikes' when speaking generally, include the verb in comparative clauses ('as ... as they are') and avoid duplicated words; keep spoken register with appropriate pauses and contractions if desired.