自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur jawaban. Gunakan bentuk waktu yang benar (past tense) dan buat satu kalimat topik diikuti satu atau dua pendukung singkat. Hindari redundansi dan jangan lebih dari 5 kalimat. Contoh fokus: nyatakan kepemilikan lalu beri detail spesifik seperti warna, siapa yang membelikan, atau bagaimana Anda menggunakannya.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon.

建議: Perbaiki pemilihan kata dan berikan alasan atau contoh spesifik. Gunakan kata yang relevan seperti "bicycles" atau "cycling" dan sertakan alasan singkat yang terhubung dengan konteks (mis. kemacetan, olahraga, atau rekreasi). Gunakan linking word untuk koherensi.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Indonesia because many people use them to avoid traffic and for exercise. For instance, on weekends you can see many groups of cyclists riding along parks and coastal roads.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. This is a tense mismatch. Use past simple 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: change present tense verbs to past tense when referring to past events. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, bikers are popular in Indonesia.

✓ Yes, bicycles (or bikes) are popular in Indonesia.

The student used 'bikers' (people who ride bikes) which changes the meaning; likely intended to say that bikes themselves are popular. Also 'bikers are popular' is awkward if referring to the objects. Use 'bicycles' or 'bikes' to refer to the items. If meaning people, keep 'bikers' but context asks about 'bikes'. Suggestion: choose 'bikes' or 'bicycles' to answer the question directly. Grammar problem type ID:1