自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Provide a direct, complete response with a topic sentence and brief supporting detail. Avoid one-word answers. Give a clear past tense statement about whether you had a bike, add one short reason or memory, and keep it under 3–4 sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “when” to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it every day to ride around my neighborhood because it was a convenient way to visit friends. I especially remember riding to the park after school.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details. Use accurate vocabulary and correct grammar (singular/plural, articles). Replace unclear phrases (e.g., “platinum I just claim”) with concrete examples (shared bikes, mountain bikes). Use linking words such as “because”, “for example”, or “also” and keep responses to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many cities have shared bike systems and there are a variety of bikes in parks, such as city bikes and mountain bikes, so people use them for commuting and recreation.

× Yes, I do think that bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but slightly wordy. No change needed except optional removal of 'that' for more natural spoken English: 'I do think bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: omit unnecessary conjunctions to sound more natural.

× This is because in my country in every parks we have many types of bikes, for example platinum I just claim.

✓ This is because in my country, in every park we have many types of bikes; for example, a platinum one, I suppose.

Errors identified: incorrect plural/singular with 'parks' after 'every' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1), incorrect preposition/order (should be 'in every park' not 'in my country in every parks') and unclear phrase 'I just claim' (sentence structure/error in word choice). Corrections made: use singular 'park' after 'every', add commas for clarity, replace 'for example platinum I just claim' with 'for example, a platinum one, I suppose' to convey an example and tentative statement. Suggestion: use 'every' with singular nouns, place prepositional phrases clearly, and replace informal 'I just claim' with 'I suppose' or 'I think' to sound natural.