自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in past tense, be natural and concise, and add one brief supporting detail. Use linking words if you add information. For example, say you didn’t have one and give a short reason or context.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city, so my parents preferred that I walk or take public transport for safety reasons.

建議: Give a clear, grammatical opinion and support it with specific reasons or comparisons. Use linking words like “because” or “however” to make the response coherent. Avoid vague phrases like “in stage.”

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience and comfort. However, bicycles are becoming more common in some cities due to traffic and new bike lanes.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student used a present-tense negative 'I don't have,' which is incorrect for talking about the past. Use the past tense 'I didn't' or the past form 'I didn't have' to match the time frame. Suggestion: say 'No, I didn't' or 'No, I didn't have one.'

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

Same sentence repeated: the answer must be in past tense to match 'when you were a child.' 'I don't have' is present tense; use 'I didn't have' or 'I didn't have one.' This aligns verb tense with the question's past time frame.

× No, it is not in stage.

✓ No, it is not common.

The phrase 'it is not in stage' is ungrammatical and uses an incorrect pronoun/reference. The student likely means 'bikes are not common' or 'they are not popular.' Use a clear subject 'they' or 'bikes' and an appropriate adjective such as 'common' or 'popular.' Also align number: 'bikes' plural -> 'they are.' Suggestion: 'No, they are not common.' or 'No, bicycles are not popular.'

× Uh, car is the popular one.

✓ Uh, cars are the popular choice.

The student used singular 'car' with 'is' but is contrasting with 'bikes' (plural); it's more natural to use plural 'cars are' or to use an article 'the car is the popular one.' Also 'the popular one' is awkward; 'the popular choice' or 'more popular' works better. Suggestion: 'Cars are more popular.' or 'The car is the popular choice.'