自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и сделайте ответ более естественным и связным. Уточните значение («three whole bike» непонятно) и используйте связующие слова, чтобы объединить идеи. Сократите ответы до 2–4 предложений, начните с основной фразы, затем добавьте 1–2 уточняющих детали (когда/почему вы любили велосипед, кто подарил).

範例: Yes — I had a red bicycle when I was a child. It was my first bike, a gift from my father for my birthday, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood.

建議: Улучшите грамматику и связность: убрать заполнители («uh»), использовать правильные глагольные формы и добавить конкретные детали (кто катается на велосипедах и почему). Используйте связочные слова (например, especially, because, for example) и ограничьте ответ 2–4 предложениями.

範例: Yes, absolutely. Many people choose bicycles, especially in good weather, because cycling is an inexpensive and healthy way to commute. For example, students and office workers often cycle to save money and stay fit.

× It was three whole bike.

✓ It was three whole bikes.

The noun 'bike' should be plural because it is quantified by the number 'three'. In English, countable nouns require a plural form when the number is greater than one. Suggestion: use the plural form 'bikes' after numerals greater than one.

× It was my first bike that was gifted by my father on my birthday.

✓ It was my first bike, which my father gifted me for my birthday.

The original sentence is awkwardly structured. Use a non-defining relative clause 'which' and the verb 'gift' in active voice with the indirect object 'me' to sound natural. Also 'for my birthday' is the usual idiom. Suggestion: prefer 'which my father gifted me for my birthday' or 'that my father gave me for my birthday.'

× I love.

✓ I loved it.

The sentence fragment 'I love.' lacks an object and tense consistency. The context is past (childhood), so use past tense 'loved' and include the object 'it' to complete the thought. Suggestion: say 'I loved it' or 'I loved that bike.'

× people prefer take a bike, especially, uh, when the weather is nice, uh, and sunny, so it's perfect way to unwind after a long day and keep a fit.

✓ people prefer to take a bike, especially when the weather is nice and sunny, so it's a perfect way to unwind after a long day and to keep fit.

'Prefer' is normally followed by the infinitive with 'to' or the -ing form ('prefer to take' or 'prefer taking'); here use 'prefer to take'. 'It's perfect way' needs the article 'a'. 'Keep a fit' is incorrect; use 'keep fit' without an article. Also remove filler 'uh' and redundant commas. Suggestion: use 'prefer to take a bike', 'it's a perfect way', and 'keep fit.'