自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar (use correct tense and verb forms) and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 4–5 sentences), and avoid repetitions.

範例: No, I didn’t own a bike as a child. However, I often borrowed a friend’s bike to ride around the neighborhood, and we would race or explore nearby parks. Because I didn’t have my own bike, those outings were occasional but memorable.

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy (subject–verb agreement and tense consistency) and use clearer linking words to contrast past and present. Provide a specific reason or example to support the claim and avoid fillers like “uh.”

範例: Yes, bicycles became more popular during the pandemic because people avoided public transport. However, nowadays most people prefer motorcycles for daily commuting due to their speed and convenience, especially in cities with longer distances.

× I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I did borrowed my friend's bike, uh, to bike around the neighborhood and, uh, play with my friends.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I did borrow my friend's bike to ride around the neighborhood and play with my friends.

The auxiliary 'did' requires the base form of the main verb, not the past tense or past participle. 'Did borrowed' is incorrect; use 'did borrow'. Also 'to bike' is awkward in this context; 'to ride' is more natural. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× Yes, bikes were popular in the pandemic era, but right now most of the people doesn't use bike anymore. Uh, they rather commute and use motorcycle for everyday transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes were popular during the pandemic, but right now most people don't use bikes anymore. They prefer to commute by motorcycle for everyday transportation.

There are several agreement and article issues: 'most of the people doesn't' mixes plural subject with singular verb; it should be 'most people don't' (plural subject with plural verb). 'Use bike' needs plural or an article; 'use bikes' is correct. 'In the pandemic era' is awkward; 'during the pandemic' is more natural. 'They rather commute and use motorcycle' is incorrect verb choice and article use; use 'They prefer to commute by motorcycle' or 'They prefer to commute using motorcycles.' Grammar problem type ID: 27