自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 질문을 이해하지 못한 것 같습니다. 과거 시제 질문에는 과거 시제로 대답하세요. 간단한 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 필요하면 한두 문장의 추가 설명을 덧붙이세요. 문법(과거 시제, 관사)과 어휘(‘bike’ 대신 ‘bicycle’ 또는 ‘a bike’) 사용에 주의하세요.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride around my neighborhood and visit friends. It was a small blue bicycle with a basket, which made it easy to carry my school books.

建議: 대답이 길지만 문장이 끊기고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 먼저 명확한 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 이어서 이유를 1~2개 구체적으로 제시하세요. 연결어(for example, because, so)로 문장을 매끄럽게 이어주고, 단수/복수와 관사 사용에 유의하세요.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work or school. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and public bike-sharing systems, which makes cycling convenient and affordable.

× Did you have a bike when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The sentence uses the present tense 'are' but the time phrase 'when you were a child' requires past tense. Use 'were' to match the past reference. Also the auxiliary 'Did' already marks past, so the clause should use past simple 'were'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for both the auxiliary and time clause: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'

× Well, I think so, bike is popular in my country because many Korean people always use bice bicycle to go to company or school because and many people who doesn't have many people.

✓ Well, I think so. Bicycles are popular in my country because many Korean people often use bicycles to go to work or school, and many people do not have cars.

This sentence has multiple problems: wrong article and singular/plural ('bike' should be plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally) and incorrect verb form 'doesn't' with plural subject. 'Bice' is a typo and should be 'bicycle' or 'bicycles'. 'Go to company' is unnatural; use 'go to work'. The clause 'many people who doesn't have many people' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'many people do not have cars' to express likely intent. Suggestions: Use plural for general statements ('Bicycles are popular'), match subject and verb ('many people do not' not 'doesn't'), fix typos, and use natural collocations ('go to work' or 'go to school').