自行车Part 1 評分報告

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Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

Do you have the bike when you were child?

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分數: 20.0

建議: Bạn đã không trả lời đúng câu hỏi; câu trả lời dùng thì sai và thiếu thông tin. Cần: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (ví dụ: Yes, I did. / No, I didn’t.). (2) Dùng thì quá khứ đơn để mô tả tình huống đã xảy ra (had/didn't have). (3) Thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn (tuổi, loại xe, lý do) và dùng từ nối nếu cần. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, tự nhiên và chính xác.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, which I used to ride to my friend’s house. Although it was old, it was very important to me because it helped me learn to be independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分數: 15.0

建議: Thí sinh không trả lời câu hỏi, mà chỉ lặp lại. Cần: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp với ý kiến rõ ràng (Yes/No/It depends). (2) Hỗ trợ bằng lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: giao thông, văn hóa, cơ sở hạ tầng) và nếu có thể cho ví dụ hoặc so sánh. (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, however, for example). Giữ 2–4 câu, tự nhiên và ngắn gọn.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. However, in big cities many people prefer motorcycles or cars due to long distances and heavy traffic.

文法

'6:Present tense issue'

× 'Do you have the bike when you were child?'

'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'

'The student used present tense "do you have" while the question asks about a past time (when you were a child). Use the past simple "Did you have" for actions or states in the past. Also "the bike" should be indefinite "a bike" because it is not a specific bike, and add the article "a" before "child" and include the article "a" after "were" -> "when you were a child". Suggestion: Use past simple for past time expressions and correct articles: "Did you have a bike when you were a child?"'},{

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PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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