自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid tense errors and repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, use past tense consistently ("I didn't have a bike") and explain why with a simple reason ("I wasn't interested in cycling").

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wasn't interested in cycling, so my parents never bought one for me. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

建議: Be more coherent and use linking words to connect ideas; provide specific examples and correct small grammar points (use articles and plural forms). For instance, say why you think bikes are popular and give evidence such as bike lanes, bike-share programs, or cultural habits.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people cycle for short trips. For example, the government has introduced a bike-share program and built dedicated bike lanes in cities, which makes cycling convenient and common.

× No, I didn't have a bike because I don't.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I didn't.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. The speaker is talking about childhood (past), so both verbs should be past tense. Change 'don't' to 'didn't' to maintain past-tense consistency.

× I didn't like ride a bike bike, so my parents didn't buy a bike.

✓ I didn't like riding a bike, so my parents didn't buy me one.

After 'didn't like' we use the base verb or the -ing form; in negative past constructions, 'like' is followed by the -ing form for general activities (or 'to' + base). Also 'ride a bike bike' contains a repeated word and sounds unnatural; 'buy me one' clarifies the object. Use 'riding' and correct redundancy.

× Yes, I think so because many people ride a bike, I can see them and government has policy about lending a bike.

✓ Yes, I think so because many people ride bikes; I can see them, and the government has a policy about lending bikes.

Several issues: 'ride a bike' is acceptable but plural 'ride bikes' matches 'many people'; run-on sentence needs separation (use semicolon or conjunction). 'government has' requires the definite article 'the' before 'government' and 'has policy' is more natural as 'has a policy'. Also plural 'bikes' fits general statements.