自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì động từ đúng và câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Tránh tiếng “uh” không cần thiết, sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'when I was younger', 'my parents', 'my older sister had one', 'she knew how to ride'). Thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn về hiện trạng (ví dụ: liệu bạn có học sau này hay không). Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để làm mạch văn tự nhiên (because, so, but).

範例: I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride. My parents never bought one for me, although my older sister had a bike because she could ride. Later I learned to ride, but I still prefer walking or taking the bus for short trips.

建議: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh dùng dạng nói thân mật như 'gonna' trong thi, sửa lỗi danh từ số nhiều và lựa chọn từ chính xác (citizens, bicycles). Dùng từ nối như 'because' và 'for example' để làm rõ lí do, và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ai sử dụng, vì sao).

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars and bikes are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and office workers ride bicycles to school or nearby workplaces to save money and avoid traffic.

× Honestly, not because, uh, when I were younger I didn't know how to ride a bike.

✓ Honestly, no, because, uh, when I was younger I didn't know how to ride a bike.

Use 'was' for first and third person singular in past tense. 'Were' is incorrect with 'I' in simple past. Suggestion: use 'I was younger' to match past tense subject-verb agreement.

× So my parent didn't buy me a bike, but only my all older sister have have because she know how to ride and but right now she you mobile to go to university.

✓ So my parents didn't buy me a bike, but only my older sister did because she knew how to ride; but right now she uses a mobile phone to go to university.

Multiple issues: 'parent' should be plural 'parents' when referring to both; 'have have' is redundant and incorrect; verb tense agreement: use past 'did' and 'knew' to match past context; 'she know' should be 'she knew'; unclear phrase 'she you mobile' seems intended as 'she uses a mobile' but context likely about transportation—if meant 'she uses a mobile to go to university' is odd; if meant 'she uses a car or motorbike', replace accordingly. Suggestion: make subjects and verbs agree in number and tense, remove duplicate words, and clarify meaning.

× So now.

✓ So now she goes to university by herself.

Fragment 'So now.' is incomplete; sentences need a subject and verb. Suggestion: expand the fragment to a full sentence that conveys current situation, e.g., 'So now she goes to university by herself.'

× I think I'm gonna say yes because cars right now is not that common among the local citizen citizens,

✓ I think I'm going to say yes because cars right now are not that common among the local citizens,

Use 'are' to agree with plural subject 'cars' (subject-verb agreement, present simple). Avoid informal 'gonna' in formal speaking; use 'going to'. 'citizens' is plural; remove duplicate 'citizen'. Suggestion: use 'cars are' and 'local citizens'.

× but with by I think that many students choose to ride back to school because of this convenience and also is also very affordable, not like cars or motorbikes, yes.

✓ but I think that many students choose to ride back to school because it is convenient and also very affordable, unlike cars or motorbikes.

Remove erroneous prepositions 'with by'. Use 'because it is convenient' to refer to riding (bicycles). 'is also' missing subject; use 'it is'. Use 'unlike' instead of 'not like' for comparison. Suggestion: streamline sentence by removing extra words and ensuring proper subject for verbs.