自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response more direct and add a brief specific detail or memory to make it more vivid. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add one supporting detail using a linking phrase. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I remember riding it around my neighborhood every afternoon, especially on the small park path near my house. It was a red bicycle with a basket, and I often practiced balancing without training wheels.

建議: State your opinion directly, then give one or two specific reasons and, if possible, a brief example or comparison. Use linking words (because, for example, however) to make the answer coherent and avoid vague phrasing. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the streets and infrastructure are not designed for cyclists. For example, there are few dedicated bike lanes and traffic is often heavy, which makes cycling unsafe. As a result, most people prefer cars or motorbikes for daily transport.

× I recall having a bike, but I can't remember the details of riding one.

✓ I recalled having a bike, but I couldn't remember the details of riding one.

The examiner's question used past tense 'Did you have', so the student's response should maintain past-tense consistency. Using present 'recall' and 'can't' creates a tense mismatch. Change to past tense verbs 'recalled' and 'couldn't' to match the context and improve temporal consistency. Suggestion: When answering questions about past events, use past-tense verbs throughout the sentence.

× I would say no, because the infrastructure or the street structure here aren't really built for bikes.

✓ I would say no, because the infrastructure and the street structure here aren't really built for bikes.

The original sentence used 'or' between two singular noun phrases ('the infrastructure' or 'the street structure'), which makes subject-verb agreement and meaning unclear. If both factors contribute, use 'and' to link them. Note: 'infrastructure' is a singular uncountable noun and takes 'is' when used alone (e.g., 'the infrastructure here isn't really built...'), but because the sentence ends with the plural 'bikes' and refers to multiple elements, keeping 'aren't' can be acceptable when referring collectively to 'the infrastructure and the street structure'. For clarity and correct agreement, use 'and' to join the subjects or rephrase to a singular collective subject (e.g., 'the infrastructure here isn't really built for bikes').