自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on grammatical accuracy, clear topic sentence and relevant supporting details. Begin with a correct simple sentence answering the question, then add one or two short specific details (where, who with, or a memory). Avoid unrelated phrases and keep to 1–3 sentences. Use linking words like “and” or “also” to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around my street with my friends, especially in the evenings after school, and we liked racing each other.

建議: Reduce pauses and fillers, make a clear statement, and support it with two specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, and, moreover) and give a concrete example or detail about infrastructure or culture. Keep answers concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, and many cities have dedicated bike lanes which make riding safer.

× I had the bike when I were with a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Error type 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 22 (Article errors): 'were' does not agree with singular subject 'I' in simple past; correct form is 'was'. Also 'the bike' implies a specific bike—use 'a bike' to mean any bike in childhood. Suggestion: use 'I was' for past tense with 'I' and use the indefinite article 'a' for non-specific nouns.

× I'm kissing in my street.

✓ I used to ride a bike on my street.

Error type 8/26: 'I'm kissing' is present continuous with wrong verb 'kiss'—likely a wrong word choice; the intended meaning is past habitual action. Use 'used to ride' for past habits or 'I rode'. Also match tense to the question about childhood. Suggestion: replace incorrect verb with 'ride' and use 'used to' or past simple 'rode'.

× In my childhood my friends had also bikes.

✓ In my childhood my friends also had bikes.

Error type 27 and 1 (Singular and plural issue): Word order and article use are awkward. 'Also' should come before the verb or after subject; 'had bikes' is correct plural. Suggestion: place 'also' before the verb: 'my friends also had bikes.'

× In my country, uh, the bikes are popular, uh, because, uh, it is uh, uh, very flexible for people, uh, and also in my country, the street for bikes is also useful and.

✓ In my country, bikes are popular because they are very convenient for people, and bike lanes are also useful.

Error type 22 (Article errors), 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions): 'the bikes' is unnecessary generalization—use plural without article 'bikes'. 'It is very flexible' is wrong subject and adjective choice: 'they are very convenient' matches plural 'bikes' and 'convenient' fits meaning. 'the street for bikes' is unnatural; use 'bike lanes' or 'streets for bikes'. Remove the trailing 'and'. Suggestion: use plural subject-verb agreement, choose appropriate adjectives (convenient), and use standard collocations like 'bike lanes'.