自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct grammatical errors, avoid repetition, and make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, use past simple correctly ("I had a bike"), remove duplicate words, and replace vague phrases with precise descriptions (e.g. "training wheels" rather than "supporting wheels").

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small bright-red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for my sixth birthday. I rode it every day with my friends, and as I practised, I gradually gained confidence and finally took off the training wheels.

建議: Remove hesitations and repetitions, use a clear topic sentence, and give specific reasons with linking words. Use consistent and correct terms ("two-wheelers"/"four-wheelers") and provide one concrete example or consequence to support your view. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper and more convenient in heavy traffic. For example, many commuters use two-wheelers to save time and fuel, and parking is easier compared with cars.

× Yes, I did had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use simple past without 'did' plus past verb. When forming a positive past tense statement, use the past form of the verb (had) alone. 'Did had' is ungrammatical because 'did' already marks past and requires the base form 'have' if used in questions or negatives. Suggestion: say 'I had' for simple past statements.

× It was a small bright red bicycle with supporting wheels that my parents bought bought for me.

✓ It was a small bright red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for me.

There are two issues: repeated word 'bought bought' (typo/reduplication) and the collocation 'supporting wheels' is unnatural in English; 'training wheels' is the correct noun. The past participle 'bought' is correct once; remove the duplicate. Suggestion: use 'training wheels' and only one 'bought'.

× I rode it every day with my friends and built my confidence afterward and removed those supporting wheels.

✓ I rode it every day with my friends, which built my confidence, and then I removed the training wheels.

Sequence of past actions is fine but phrasing is awkward. 'Built my confidence afterward and removed those supporting wheels' is grammatically acceptable but unclear and uses 'supporting wheels' instead of 'training wheels.' Also add comma and conjunctions to clarify that riding built confidence, and then removal followed. Suggestion: split ideas and use 'then' to show sequence and 'training wheels' for natural phrasing.

× Yes in in my opinion bikes are very popular in my country because of huge population.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because of the large population.

Errors: repeated 'in in' (typo), missing commas around the parenthetical 'in my opinion', and unnatural 'because of huge population'—English requires an article 'the' and 'large' is more natural than 'huge' here. Suggestion: remove duplication, add commas, and use 'the large population' or 'the large population size'.

× People prefer to use two Wheelers over four Wheeler.

✓ People prefer to use two-wheelers over four-wheelers.

Capitalization and number agreement issues: 'Wheelers' should be lowercase and hyphenated when used as a compound noun 'two-wheelers' and 'four-wheelers'. Also pluralize both terms. Suggestion: use 'two-wheelers' and 'four-wheelers' in lowercase and plural form to match 'people' and 'prefer to use'.