自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (verb tense and article use), reduce fillers (uh), and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a Salcano bicycle, which I loved because it was sturdy and easy to ride around my neighborhood. I often rode it to the local park with my friends on weekends.

建議: Answer directly and use clearer grammar and vocabulary. Avoid many fillers and correct subject-verb agreement. Provide one or two specific reasons and a brief example or comparison. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' properly to connect ideas.

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular among adults in my country because cities lack safe bike lanes and people prefer motorbikes or cars. However, children often use bicycles in parks or within residential areas for leisure and exercise.

× Yes, I have a bike when I uh, when I was a child and uh, it's, it was a Salcano.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; it was a Salcano.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also 'it's, it was' is redundant and inconsistent; keep past 'it was.' Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for events in the past and remove redundant clauses.

× It's the good company for the bike.

✓ It was a good company for the bike.

The speaker refers to the company's suitability in the past, so use past tense 'was.' 'The good company' is unnatural here; either 'a good company' or better 'a good brand' depending on meaning. Use 'a' for non-specific singular nouns. Suggestion: choose the proper noun class ('brand' if referring to make) and use the indefinite article 'a.'

× No, I don't think so, Uh, because, uh, in our country, uh, bikes is not usable for the adult,

✓ No, I don't think so, because in our country bikes are not used by adults,

'Bikes is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; plural 'bikes' requires 'are.' Also 'not usable for the adult' is awkward; use passive 'not used by adults' or active 'adults don't use bikes.' Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and use natural collocations like 'used by adults.'

× but uh, if you are the child and uh, you can use the bike, uh, in park or your site where you, uh, live.

✓ but if you are a child you can use a bike in a park or in the neighborhood where you live.

'the child' and 'the bike' incorrectly use the definite article; use 'a child' and 'a bike' for general statements. 'In park' needs the article 'a park.' 'Your site' is unnatural; 'neighborhood' or 'area' is more natural. Also maintain consistent second-person pronoun 'you.' Suggestion: use indefinite articles for general situations and choose natural nouns like 'park' and 'neighborhood.'