自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung một hoặc hai câu mô tả ngắn về trải nghiệm (ví dụ: loại xe, ai tặng, bạn hay đi đâu, kỷ niệm). Dùng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần mở rộng (for example, because, when). Giữ tối đa 5 câu và tự nhiên.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven. I used to ride it to visit my grandparents and to play with friends in the neighborhood. It was simple but very reliable, so I learned to ride it quickly.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc lẫn phát âm/ lựa từ không rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu bị rời rạc/kết thúc không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tổ chức câu rõ ràng: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích với lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Sử dụng liên từ như "because", "for example", "so" để mạch lạc; chú ý từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "crowded cities" thay vì "crowned cities"), và tránh những mảnh câu không có nghĩa. Giữ tổng cộng tối đa 4 câu.

範例: Yes, I do. Bikes are very popular because they are inexpensive and convenient for both students and adults. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances in crowded cities where traffic is heavy. This makes cycling a practical and affordable option for everyday travel.

× Yes, I do, because I think our bikes are very cheap and convenient for the students and also for the adults.

✓ Yes, I do, because I think bicycles here are very cheap and convenient for students and adults.

The original sentence uses 'our bikes' which is acceptable but 'for the students and also for the adults' has unnecessary definite articles. In general statements about groups, omit 'the' before 'students' and 'adults'. Also 'bikes' can be more formally 'bicycles'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions/articles and simplify 'and also' to 'and'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× There are many bikes in the crowned cities and you cannot borrow your bike from the attitude to the.

✓ There are many bicycles in crowded cities, and you cannot borrow a bike from strangers on the street.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'crowned cities' is likely a misuse of 'crowded'; 'you cannot borrow your bike from the attitude to the' is ungrammatical and meaningless. This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. Correct by using 'crowded cities' and clarifying the intended meaning: probably that you cannot borrow a bike from strangers. Suggestion: keep subject-verb structure clear, use correct vocabulary, and finish the thought with a logical object. Grammar problem type ID:26