自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear, grammatically correct, and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child."), then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "At first...", "Later..."). Use correct verb tenses (past simple) and simple vocabulary you can control. Avoid redundant or unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. At first I learned to ride on a small training-wheel bike, and later my parents took the training wheels off when I became more confident. I remember practicing in the park every weekend until I could ride well.

建議: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "however"). Use correct word choice ("bike" not "buy") and consistent tense. Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum.

範例: Not really — bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel. For example, many roads are designed for motor vehicles, so people find bikes less convenient for commuting.

× Yes I have a bike with a shop.

✓ Yes, I had a bike I bought from a shop.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be past tense (had, bought) rather than present. Also 'with a shop' is incorrect English; use 'bought from a shop' to show origin. Suggestion: Use past tense for past situations and use 'bought from' to indicate where you got the bike.

× It's just a try try veil bike at 1st and then when I can write it well I take it dry well off and dry it with the two wheel.

✓ It was just a trial bike at first, and when I could ride it well I removed the training wheels and rode it on two wheels.

This sentence has multiple problems: wrong tense ('It's' should be 'It was' for past), incorrect word choice ('try try veil' unclear; 'trial' is appropriate), wrong verb forms ('can write' should be 'could ride'), and awkward phrases ('take it dry well off' should be 'removed the training wheels'). Also 'with the two wheel' should be 'on two wheels'. Suggestion: Break long ideas into smaller clauses, use past tense consistently for past events, and use standard collocations: 'trial bike', 'training wheels', 'ride on two wheels'.

× It's very.

✓ It was very fun./It was great.

The fragment 'It's very.' is incomplete and unclear. Use an adjective or adjective phrase to complete the thought. Also keep past tense: 'It was...' rather than 'It's'. Suggestion: Provide a full adjective phrase such as 'It was very fun' or 'It was great'.

× Not exactly because in my country we used to travel with motorbike or personal car.

✓ Not exactly, because in my country we usually travel by motorbike or by private car.

'Used to' implies a past habit; the student means a current general habit, so present simple ('usually travel') is correct. Also prepositions: use 'by' for modes of transport and 'private car' or 'personal car' but 'by private car' is more natural. Suggestion: Use present simple for general habits and 'travel by' + mode of transport.

× Uh, we don't use buy in our daily life.

✓ We don't use bicycles in our daily life./We don't use bikes in our daily life.

The phrase 'use buy' is incorrect—likely a confusion between 'buy' and 'bicycle/bike'. Context shows the student means 'bikes'. Use the noun 'bikes' with 'use'. Suggestion: Choose the correct noun and verb: 'we don't use bikes' or 'we don't ride bikes'.

× Yes, it's not popular in my country.

✓ So, bicycles are not popular in my country.

'It's not popular' is vague; because the topic is 'bikes', use plural 'bicycles are not popular' to match general statement. Also 'are' fits general present-tense facts. Suggestion: Use the plural subject and present simple for general facts: 'Bicycles are not popular in my country.'