自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 発音や文法の誤りを直し、明確で簡潔な構造にすること。まず主題文で「はい／いいえ」と答え、次に短い理由や詳細を一つか二つ述べる練習をしてください。接続語（because, so, however など）を適切に使い、曖昧な語や繰り返し（uh, umm）を減らすこと。具体的には過去形の使用（had, injured）と外傷の表現（sprained my ankle, broke my ankle）を覚え、1～2文で要点を伝える練習をしてください。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn’t enjoy riding it because I once badly sprained my ankle. After that accident I avoided cycling for a long time.

建議: 答えを明確に述べ、支持する具体例を1～2点挙げる練習をしてください。まず短い主張（Yes／No／Partly）を述べ、次に理由を示すために因果関係の接続語（because, although, so）を使い、特定のグループ（students, commuters）や状況（city traffic, low cost）を挙げてください。語彙は簡潔で正確に（popular, common, prefer public transport）を用い、躊躇語を減らしましょう。

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially among students and commuters. Because traffic is heavy and buses can be crowded, many people prefer cycling as a cheap and convenient option.

× Yeah, I have always had experiences on trying bike, uh, bad days and no good experiences because uh, I get a serious hold, umm, in my an uh, ankle.

✓ Yes. I have always had bad experiences trying to ride a bike because I badly hurt my ankle.

The original sentence has several tense and verb-form problems. 'I have always had experiences on trying bike' is unnatural; use 'have had bad experiences trying to ride a bike' to combine present perfect with the action. 'Trying bike' needs the verb 'to ride' and the gerund form 'trying to ride'. 'I get a serious hold ... in my ankle' is incorrect: to describe injury use 'I badly hurt my ankle' (simple past or present perfect depending on context). Use 'have always had' to indicate repeated experiences up to now, and 'trying to ride a bike' as the correct verb phrase. Suggestions: replace awkward phrases with natural collocations (hurt my ankle, bad experiences, trying to ride).

× I can surely this, uh, this no problem because, uh, this often popular in the still in the students, uh, is among the students, umm, the authors often choose trust public, uh, public transporter or.

✓ I can say this for sure: there is no problem because bicycles are still popular among students; students often choose public transport.

The original is fragmented and has incorrect pronoun and sentence structure use. 'I can surely this' should be 'I can say this for sure' (correct verb and word order). 'This often popular in the still in the students' should be 'bicycles are still popular among students' (use there is/are or subject + verb, correct preposition 'among'). 'Authors often choose trust public, public transporter' is unclear; likely intended 'students often choose public transport'. Use 'students' as the subject and 'choose public transport' as the verb phrase. Suggestions: form full sentences with a clear subject and verb, use 'among' for groups, and use the noun 'public transport' for mass noun.