自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct past-tense answer and expand slightly with one or two supporting details (topic sentence + brief elaboration). Use past tense and avoid single-word replies. Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I rode around my neighborhood every weekend. It helped me learn balance and gave me more freedom to visit friends.

建議: Make the answer more fluent and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Avoid filler sounds (uh) and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "afford" instead of "offer"). Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people see cycling as a healthy form of exercise. Also, bicycles are affordable for many families who cannot afford cars, so they remain a common mode of daily transport.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense (did/have when you were a child). The student's answer should also be in the past tense. Using 'do' is present-tense auxiliary, so 'Yes, I did' correctly matches the past context. Suggestion: Match the tense of your short answers to the question; use 'did' for past-tense yes/no questions.

× Yes, it is because many people think riding bicycle is uh, one of, uh, physical sport and, and uh, also most people are very poor and they can't offer a car, so they used to buy bicycle.

✓ Yes, they are, because many people think riding a bicycle is a physical sport, and also most people are very poor and cannot afford a car, so they usually buy bicycles.

Multiple issues fall under subject-verb agreement and related grammar types listed: 'Yes, it is' incorrectly uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes' (plural) so 'they are' is correct (subject-verb agreement). 'Riding bicycle' needs the article 'a' before 'bicycle'. 'One of, uh, physical sport' is incorrect: 'a physical sport' or better 'one of the physical sports' (plural) depending on intended meaning; here 'a physical sport' fits. 'They can't offer a car' misuses 'offer' instead of 'afford' (vocabulary choice) and 'can't' can be expanded to 'cannot' in formal speech. 'Used to buy bicycle' is awkward: 'used to' implies habitual past, but the speaker means 'they usually buy bicycles' or 'they tend to buy bicycles' as a general present habit; hence present habitual 'usually buy bicycles' is appropriate and plural 'bicycles' matches 'most people'. Suggestions: Use plural pronouns and verbs to agree with plural nouns (bikes -> they are). Use articles with singular countable nouns (a bicycle). Use 'afford' for being able to pay, and use 'usually' or 'tend to' for general habits in the present. Ensure nouns and verbs agree in number (bicycles vs bicycle).