自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo, nên điểm thấp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi mua xe, ai tặng, bạn thường đi đâu) và dùng từ nối nếu cần để liên kết ý. Giữ tối đa 3–5 câu, tự nhiên và súc tích.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood every day. Because it had a comfortable seat and sturdy tires, I felt confident riding on small hills.

建議: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi và có lỗi phát âm/chính tả (“buys” thay vì “bikes”), nên câu không rõ ràng. Trả lời trực tiếp với ý kiến, nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Dùng từ nối (because, therefore, for example) để mạch lạc. Giữ 2–4 câu, tránh lặp lại câu hỏi.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters and students riding bikes to avoid traffic, and there are also several bike-sharing programs available.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error: the reply should be a statement with past simple tense 'had' to match 'were a child'. Suggestion: use past simple verb forms for past events and make sure to provide a statement (subject + verb) rather than repeating the question.

× Do you think buys a popular in the country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in the country?

The student used 'buys' which is incorrect word choice and form. The correct noun is 'bikes' (plural) and the verb structure should be 'are popular' to describe a current general state. This involves singular/plural and verb form errors: use the plural noun 'bikes' and the present simple 'are' for plural subjects. Suggestion: use the noun 'bikes' and pair it with the correct verb 'are' for plural subjects in present simple when asking about general popularity.