自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse devrait être directe et naturelle. Ici vous avez répété la question au lieu de répondre. Répondez d'abord par une phrase simple (oui/non) puis ajoutez un ou deux détails spécifiques (par exemple l'âge, le type de vélo, où vous rouliez). Utilisez un mot de liaison si vous ajoutez une raison ou une anecdote. Limitez-vous à 1–3 phrases pour rester concise.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and I used to ride it around the park near my house every weekend.

建議: Corrigez les erreurs d'article et de prononciation et rendez la réponse plus naturelle. Donnez une opinion claire puis des raisons spécifiques et un exemple concret. Utilisez des connecteurs (for example, moreover) pour la cohérence. Évitez les hésitations comme 'Uh' et limitez la réponse à 2–3 phrases bien construites.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in France. For example, many people cycle on weekends for leisure, and others use bicycles as a practical alternative to public transport when commuting to work.

× I think back are really popular in France.

✓ I think bikes are really popular in France.

The student used 'back' instead of 'bikes', which is a wrong word choice causing the sentence to be meaningless; this is a sentence structure/word choice error. Replace with the correct noun 'bikes' to match the subject intended and ensure plural agreement with 'are'. Suggestion: Listen to the word 'bike' and check spelling; confirm subject number matches the verb (bikes -> are).

× Uh, people are using it as an hobby during the weekend,

✓ Uh, people use them as a hobby at the weekend,

Using 'are using' (present continuous) is acceptable for temporary actions but 'people use them' (simple present) is more natural for habitual activities. 'It' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural; use 'them'. Also 'an hobby' is wrong article use before a consonant sound; use 'a hobby'. 'During the weekend' is acceptable but 'at the weekend' is more natural in British English. Suggestion: For habits use simple present; match pronouns' number to nouns; choose the correct indefinite article ('a' before consonant sounds).

× but it can be really useful as an alternative to public transport to go to work for example.

✓ but they can be really useful as an alternative to public transport for going to work, for example.

Several issues: pronoun 'it' should be plural 'they' to match 'bikes'. Use 'for going to work' or 'to get to work' rather than 'to go to work' after 'alternative to public transport'. Comma before 'for example' improves clarity. The preposition 'to' after 'alternative' should be followed by a noun or gerund phrase: 'alternative to public transport for getting to work'. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match number, and follow 'alternative to' with noun/gerund; place 'for example' at end with comma separation.