自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct grammatical errors, make sentences concise and coherent, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use past simple consistently and include linking words for flow.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was a child, and I often rode it with my younger brother because we only had one bicycle. As a result, we learned to take turns and help each other balance, which made those afternoons really fun.

建議: Give a direct clear opinion, correct grammar, and provide specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (however, because, for example) to structure the answer and avoid vague phrases.

範例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in Korea because the cities are crowded and there are few dedicated bike lanes. For example, in Seoul most people prefer subways or cars, so cycling is mainly for leisure in parks rather than everyday commuting.

× I used to use bike with my younger brother because I have I had only 1 bike so it was really great time.

✓ I used to use the bike with my younger brother because I had only one bike, so it was a really great time.

Singular/plural and article usage: 'bike' should be 'the bike' when referring to a specific bike shared between siblings. 'I have I had' is a tense and redundancy error; keep past tense 'had' to match 'used to'. The numeral '1' should be written as 'one' in formal text and is followed by the singular noun 'bike'. Also add an article 'a' before 'really great time' to make the noun phrase grammatical. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, use appropriate articles ('the' or 'a'), and write numbers in words in spoken-style corrections.

× I had a bike when I were child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Subject-verb agreement in past tense: with the singular first-person subject 'I' the past tense of 'to be' is 'was', not 'were'. Also insert the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: remember that 'I' + past 'to be' = 'I was'. Use articles with singular countable nouns.

× No, I don't. Bike is not popular in Korea because it's not useful to use bike in Korea.

✓ No, I don't think so. Bikes are not popular in Korea because it is not very practical to use a bike there.

Pronoun and article issues plus plurality: 'Bike is not popular' should be plural 'Bikes are not popular' when speaking generically. 'No, I don't.' is incomplete; expand to 'No, I don't think so.' Use 'it is' or 'it is not very practical' rather than 'it's not useful to use bike'. Use the article 'a' before 'bike' and use 'there' to refer to Korea. Suggestion: for general statements use plural nouns (bikes) or a singular with an article (a bike) and use clear pronouns ('there') for locations.

× There isn't have lots of bike line except for.

✓ There aren't many bike lanes except in some areas.

Incorrect 'there be' construction: 'There isn't have' is ungrammatical. Use 'There aren't' for plural 'bike lanes'. 'Lots of' is informal; 'many' fits better here. 'Bike line' should be 'bike lanes'. 'Except for' needs an object; 'except in some areas' or 'except downtown' completes the sentence. Suggestion: use correct 'there is/are' + plural noun forms and choose appropriate prepositional phrase to complete 'except'.