自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答太简短，缺少细节和连接词。根据评分规则，应先给出主题句，然后用1-2个句子补充具体细节（例如谁给的、什么时候开始、常去哪儿骑或对你的影响），并使用连接词使表达更连贯。注意句子总数不超过5句。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike from my parents when I was six, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because of that I became more independent and confident about going out on my own.

建議: 回答过于简单，缺少理由和具体例子。应先给出直接观点，然后用1-2句说明原因或举例（例如通勤、锻炼、环保或某些城市骑行文化），并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”来增强连贯性。保持总句数不超过5句。

範例: Yes, they are. Bikes are a common mode of transport in many cities because they are cheap and convenient, and for example, you can see many people cycling to work on dedicated bike lanes during rush hour.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该回答为对过去时问句“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”的简短肯定回答，使用助动词 did 表示过去时，结构正确且简洁，无需修改。

× Yes, they are.

✓ Yes, they are.

该回答为对一般现在时问句“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?”的简短肯定回答，使用一般现在时的系动词 are 与复数主语 bikes 一致，结构正确，无需修改。