自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and fluency: start with a clear topic sentence, correct past tense and word order, and keep answer concise. Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. For example, correct the sentence to 'No, I didn't. I was born into a poor family, so we couldn't afford a bike.' Then add one brief detail, e.g., where you would have liked to ride or an alternative you used.

範例: No, I didn't. I was born into a poor family, so we couldn't afford a bike. However, I often walked to school with friends, which helped me become fit.

建議: Make the answer more natural and balanced: begin with a direct short response, then give specific reasons and an example using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'however'). Avoid vague phrases like 'big problem' without clarification. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Not really. In Iran many people prefer using cars because they are more convenient for shopping and family trips. For example, in my city the roads and traffic make cycling unsafe, so only a few people cycle for short trips.

× No, I unfortunately born in a very poor family and we didn't have a bike for ourselves.

✓ No, I was unfortunately born into a very poor family and we didn't have a bike of our own.

The sentence incorrectly omits the auxiliary verb 'was' for the passive past construction 'was born' (Past tense issue). Also, the preposition and noun phrase need adjustment: use 'born into' rather than 'born in' when referring to family circumstances, and 'of our own' is the idiomatic phrasing instead of 'for ourselves'. Suggestion: include the past passive auxiliary 'was', use 'into' with 'born', and replace 'for ourselves' with 'of our own'.

× No, I think that's a big problem with my country, Iran, because people usually use their own car for buying stuff from outside and they don't usually use bikes.

✓ No, I think that's a big problem in my country, Iran, because people usually use their own cars to buy things from outside and they don't usually use bikes.

There are several present-tense and usage issues. Use 'in my country' rather than 'with my country' (Incorrect use of prepositions, mapped to Present tense issue here because of tense/usage context). 'People usually use their own car' should use plural 'cars' to agree with the plural subject (Singular and plural issue but within present-tense habitual context). Use the infinitive 'to buy' rather than 'for buying', and 'things' is more natural than 'stuff'. Suggestion: change 'with' to 'in', pluralize 'car' to 'cars', replace 'for buying stuff' with 'to buy things'.