自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details (where, who, or a brief memory), use linking words and correct tense consistency. Avoid repeating obvious information and reduce filler words.

範例: Yes, I did. I often rode a red bicycle around my neighborhood with my parents and younger sister, especially on weekends. Because the area had quiet streets and a nearby park, we usually spent an hour or two cycling together, which helped me enjoy outdoor exercise and family time.

建議: Use correct grammar, avoid fillers, and give specific examples or reasons. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific evidence (who uses bikes, for what, and why), and use linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many office workers and students cycle to work or university because traffic is heavy and bikes are cheap and convenient. As a result, you can see bike lanes in most cities and crowded bicycle parking near transit stations.

× Of course bike is popular in my country.

✓ Of course bikes are popular in my country.

The noun 'bike' should be plural when talking generally about a type of vehicle used by many people. Use 'bikes' with the plural verb 'are' to indicate general prevalence. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to things in general (e.g., 'cars are common').

× Uh, I can see many people have their bike.

✓ Uh, I can see many people have their bikes.

When the subject 'many people' is plural, the possessive noun should also be plural ('bikes') to match. 'Their bike' implies each person shares a single bike; 'their bikes' correctly shows each person has one or more of their own. Suggestion: match possessive nouns with plural subjects (people -> their + plural noun).

× They use their bike to go to work and go get back to home.

✓ They use their bikes to go to work and to get back home.

Several preposition and phrasing issues: use 'to get back home' or simply 'get back home' instead of 'go get back to home.' Also add 'to' before the infinitive 'get.' Remove the extra preposition 'to' before 'home.' Suggestion: use 'to go to work' and 'to get back home' or 'get back home' for natural English.