自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer in past tense and add a brief reason or detail. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences). Use linking words like "because" if you add a reason.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a very hilly area and it wasn't practical. However, I used to enjoy walking to school with my friends.

建議: Answer clearly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a topic sentence that states your opinion, then give specific reasons using linking words like "because", "so", or "for example". Avoid incorrect words and keep it to 1–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars, and bicycles are cheaper to buy and maintain. For example, students and workers often use bikes to commute short distances.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question asks about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student must use past tense. The student used the present simple negative 'I don't have', which is incorrect for past reference. Use the past simple negative 'I didn't (have one)' or 'I didn't have a bike.' Suggestion: respond with 'No, I didn't' or 'No, I didn't have a bike.'

× Yes, buy car popular in my country because some people cannot afford cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people cannot afford cars.

Several issues: the student used 'buy' instead of 'bikes' (word choice), omitted the auxiliary verb 'are' for plural present ('bikes are popular') and omitted the article/number. The correct subject 'bikes' requires the present tense verb 'are' for plural (subject-verb agreement). Also keep 'because some people cannot afford cars' as the explanation. Suggestion: say 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country because some people cannot afford cars.'