自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect words (‘light’ and ‘child’). Give a direct, concise topic sentence that answers the question, then one short supporting detail. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘bike’, ‘small’, ‘red’). Keep to no more than 2–3 sentences and avoid unrelated words.

範例: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. It was bright red and I rode it to visit my friends around the neighborhood.

建議: Your response answers the question and gives two reasons, but contains some grammar errors and hesitations. Make the topic sentence clearer, remove fillers (‘uh’, ‘things’), and link reasons with a connector (e.g., ‘because’ / ‘and’). Use more precise vocabulary and a brief example to support your points.

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and ideal for navigating narrow streets. For example, many students and market vendors use bikes daily to travel short distances efficiently.

× I had a light and a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used incorrect nouns; 'a light and a child' does not make sense in context. The exam question asked about possessing a bike in childhood, so the correct response should be 'I had a bike when I was a child.' This fixes meaning and matches singular noun usage. Suggestion: Listen to the question carefully and use the noun that answers it; if you mean one bike, use the singular 'a bike.'

× Yes, things bikes are very popular in my country because it is very cheap and uh, you can go anywhere even if the street is very narrow.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and you can go anywhere even if the streets are narrow.

Problems: 'things bikes' is ungrammatical word order and an extra word; use simply 'bikes.' 'It is very cheap' incorrectly uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes' (plural) and 'cheap' describes cost — better: 'they are inexpensive.' 'Even if the street is very narrow' should use plural 'streets' or general noun and omit 'very' for concision. Suggestions: Remove unnecessary words, match pronoun number to the noun (bikes -> they), use appropriate adjective ('inexpensive' or 'cheap'), and use plural for general statements about streets.