自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer repeats the examiner's question and then gives a short, unclear response. Improve by directly answering the question first with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and avoid hesitation words (um, uh). Also correct grammar (use plural/possessive correctly) and complete your ideas. Aim for 2–4 sentences, each concise.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and to visit friends every day. Because it was light and reliable, I learned to ride quickly and felt very independent.

建議: Your answer tries to respond but has many hesitations, grammar errors, and an incomplete final clause. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, especially). Use correct noun forms (bicycles, countries) and finish your thought. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid filler sounds.

範例: Yes, bicycles are still quite popular in Vietnam. For example, many students and market vendors use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and easy to park. However, in big cities more people now use motorbikes or cars because of longer distances and faster travel.

× I think that bicycle is a very, uh, popular vehicle in Asian, uh, country, especially, uh, my country, Vietnam, umm, during the time we studying doing the.

✓ I think that bicycles are very popular in Asian countries, especially in my country, Vietnam, during the time we were studying.

Several issues addressed under the definite article and related grammar types: 1) 'that bicycle' is incorrect because the speaker means bicycles in general; use plural 'bicycles' or 'the bicycle' with specific reference. 2) 'a very popular vehicle in Asian, country' misuses articles and singular/plural; use plural 'Asian countries' or 'in Asia' and omit 'a' when speaking generally. 3) 'especially, uh, my country, Vietnam' needs the preposition 'in' before 'my country'. 4) 'during the time we studying doing the' is ungrammatical; the correct past continuous form is 'we were studying.' The correction uses plural nouns for general statements, adds the preposition 'in', and completes the tense as past continuous to match 'when you were a child' timeframe. Suggestions: use plural for general statements about types of things, include necessary prepositions like 'in', and use correct past continuous 'were studying' for actions happening in the past. Please avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' when writing.