自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response is not adequate. You should answer clearly with a topic sentence (yes/no), add 1–2 supporting details using linking words, and keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when you got it or how often you used it, and maybe add a short reason or memory.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven and rode it to my friends’ houses every weekend. Because I lived near a park, I spent a lot of time practising cycling there, which helped me become confident on the road.

建議: You did not answer this question. Provide a clear topic sentence (Yes/No/Partly), then support it with specific reasons or examples and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many people use bicycles for short journeys because cycling is cheaper and faster than driving in heavy traffic. Moreover, recent government initiatives to build bike lanes have encouraged more commuters to ride to work.

× MMM.

✓ Yes, I did.

The original response 'MMM.' is not a grammatical sentence and does not directly answer the question. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use a complete sentence that fits the past tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The correct brief answer is 'Yes, I did.' For more detail, add a simple past clause: 'Yes, I did; I had a bike when I was about eight.' This provides a clear, grammatically correct answer and matches the tense of the question.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student left the answer blank, which is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because it provides no sentence. A complete response to 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' should use the present simple for general opinions: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' To expand, say why: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular because many people use them for short trips and exercise.' This uses correct tense and gives a clear, grammatical answer.