自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy, tense consistency and fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, avoid filler words, and add one or two concise supporting details. Use linking words if adding extra information.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was seven, and I taught myself to ride it in our neighborhood park. As a result, I became confident cycling short distances to visit friends.

建議: Speak more fluently, correct grammar (article use, gerunds), and provide a specific reason or example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the answer coherent and concise (max 5 sentences).

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride bikes in the mornings as a form of exercise because it helps them stay healthy and saves money on transport. As a result, you often see dedicated cycle lanes in parks and near schools.

× Yes, I have one. I think my father bought that for me and I practice myself.

✓ Yes, I had one. I think my father bought it for me and I used to practice on it myself.

Problems combined: (5) Past tense issue and (15) Incorrect reflexive pronoun use and (8) Verb + -ing form. The question asks about having a bike as a child, so past tense should be used ('had' not 'have'). 'That' is acceptable but 'it' is more natural for a previously mentioned object. 'I practice myself' is unnatural; use 'I used to practice on it myself' to indicate a habitual past action and correct verb phrase and reflexive use. Suggestion: match tense to the time reference (childhood = past), use 'used to' for past habitual actions, and use 'myself' only when appropriate to emphasize the subject performed the action alone.

× I think a bike is popular in our country, uh, most people like to riding bike to as a, uh, exercise to keep them healthy.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country; most people like to ride bikes as an exercise to keep them healthy.

Problems combined: (1) Singular and plural issue and (22) Article errors and (8) Verb + -ing form and (11) Incorrect use of prepositions. The original mixes singular 'a bike' with general meaning (use plural 'bikes' or 'a bike is popular' with different structure). 'Like to riding' is incorrect: after 'like to' use base verb 'ride' or use gerund 'like riding'. 'Bike' should be plural when speaking generally ('ride bikes'). The phrase 'to as a, uh, exercise' is incorrect ordering; use 'as an exercise'. Also change 'them' to 'their health' is possible, but 'keep them healthy' referring to people is okay. Suggestion: When talking generally, use plural nouns and correct verb form after 'like' ('like to ride' or 'like riding'); use 'as an exercise' for purpose.