学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating you are a student, then give one or two relevant details (study program, purpose) using correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) to connect reasons. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences and correct articles/prepositions (e.g., 'at the University of Dhaka', 'studying business').

範例: I'm a student at the University of Dhaka, where I study business. I'm also preparing for the IELTS because I plan to study abroad next year.

建議: Answer directly with the institution and location, then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid hesitations and repetition; remove irrelevant repetition about IELTS if already mentioned. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to clarify purpose.

範例: I study at Central University in Dhaka, which is in a busy part of the city. I am preparing for the IELTS so I can apply to universities abroad.

建議: Be natural and avoid overuse of adjectives and filler words. Start with a clear opinion (Yes, it is) and give two specific reasons (e.g., good facilities, supportive staff). Use varied vocabulary but not excessive synonyms. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, it is a great place to study. The campus has good facilities and a friendly community, and I've enjoyed studying there for two years.

建議: Be specific about the change you want and explain why. Begin with a topic sentence naming the change (e.g., renovate the campus or improve facilities), then give one concrete reason and possibly a suggested solution. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes. I would like the university to renovate its old campus buildings because they are worn and affect student comfort. For example, updating classrooms and heating would create a better learning environment.

建議: Start with a clear statement of your plan, then give specific details: destination, subject, or reasons. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) and correct tense/word forms. Avoid generalizations like 'everyone' and keep it concise.

範例: My plan is to study abroad, preferably in the UK or Canada, to pursue a master's in business. I decided this a few years ago because international study will improve my career prospects and cultural experience.

× Well, I'm a student, I'm currently studying in University of Dhaka at at business and at bus station as well as I'm also preparing for IELTS exam because I have to study next year. I hope I study abroad in.

✓ Well, I'm a student. I'm currently studying at the University of Dhaka in the Business department and I also work at a bus station. I am also preparing for the IELTS exam because I will study next year. I hope to study abroad.

Errors: incorrect preposition use with 'University' (should be 'at the University of Dhaka'), word order and article missing ('in the Business department'), repetition and unclear phrase 'at at business and at bus station' corrected to 'in the Business department and I also work at a bus station'. Tense and modal problems: 'I have to study next year' is acceptable but clearer is 'I will study next year'; 'I hope I study abroad in' is ungrammatical — correct to 'I hope to study abroad'. Suggestions: use 'at the University', include articles ('the'), use infinitive after 'hope' ('hope to...'), and keep consistent present continuous for current activities and future modal 'will' for planned future.

× Well, I'm currently studying in Central University, which is located in Dhaka, uh, the crowded city area of the, the uh, I'm preparing for. Also, I'm preparing for aisles, uh, for uh, giving, uh, for studying abroad and I have to get the score.

✓ Well, I'm currently studying at Central University, which is located in Dhaka's crowded city area. Also, I'm preparing for the IELTS exam because I need to get the required score to study abroad.

Errors: preposition with 'study' at an institution should be 'at' not 'in' (Grammar problem type: Present tense issue and Incorrect use of prepositions). 'Dhaka, uh, the crowded city area of the, the uh, I'm preparing for' is fragmented and unclear; rearranged to 'Dhaka's crowded city area'. 'aisles' is a misspelling of 'IELTS'. 'for giving' is wrong collocation; use 'preparing for the IELTS exam' and 'need to get the required score'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions, remove fillers, spell exam names correctly, and use clear clause linking 'because' to explain purpose.

× Absolutely why not? It is very very good place to it is very fabulous, fantastic place to study uh in I'm studying since 2 years. I love this place. I love this environment, I love this campus. I hope you understand.

✓ Absolutely, why not? It is a very, very good place; it is a fabulous, fantastic place to study. I have been studying here for two years. I love this place, I love the environment, and I love this campus. I hope you understand.

Errors: missing articles ('a very good place'), word order and redundancy fixed. Tense error: 'I'm studying since 2 years' is incorrect — English uses present perfect continuous or present perfect with 'for' for duration: 'I have been studying here for two years.' Also 'this environment' and 'this campus' need determiners or pronouns kept consistent; added commas and conjunctions for fluency. Suggestions: use 'a' with singular countable nouns, use 'have been studying/for two years' to express ongoing action from past to present, and use conjunctions to join short sentences.

× Well, I want to change one thing about mine. University is the pole area. My university is old campus and it is very We have a big pool area and it is.

✓ Well, I want to change one thing about my university. The campus is old and rundown. We have a big pool area, but it is not well maintained.

Errors: pronoun and noun phrase issues ('about mine' should be 'about my university') and article errors ('University is the pole area' is unclear and ungrammatical). Sentence fragments and incomplete ideas: 'and it is very We have...' are fragments. Rewrote to express likely intended meaning: campus is old and the pool is not well maintained. Suggestions: use possessive adjectives ('my university'), use articles ('the campus'), avoid fragments by completing clauses, and be specific about what should change.

× Very interesting question. My future plan is studying abroad. I decided few years ago. I hope it's will be very beneficial for me. Studying abroad is one thing that everyone wants to experience in one in a life.

✓ That's a very interesting question. My future plan is to study abroad. I decided a few years ago. I hope it will be very beneficial for me. Studying abroad is something that everyone wants to experience in their life.

Errors: verb form after 'plan is' should be infinitive 'to study' (Verb + -ing form and Present tense issue). 'I decided few years ago' needs an article: 'a few years ago.' 'I hope it's will be' has conflicting contractions and modal 'will' — correct to 'I hope it will be.' The last sentence has articles and wording errors: 'one thing' and 'in one in a life' corrected to 'something... in their life.' Suggestions: use 'to + verb' after 'plan is', include articles like 'a few years ago,' avoid mixing contractions with 'will,' and use 'their life' for general statements.