学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer a clear, natural topic sentence and correct grammar. State your current status briefly, then add one specific detail about your plans. Use correct verb forms and articles.

範例: I recently finished my 12th grade, and I am planning to pursue higher education abroad. For example, I am preparing to apply to undergraduate programs in the UK because they offer strong courses in my chosen subject.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific detail about the place (type of school, what you study there, or what you like about it). Use a full sentence and natural prepositions.

範例: I study at Chidwala Higher Secondary School, where I completed my science stream. I especially like the well-equipped labs and supportive teachers.

建議: Answer directly with a complete sentence and then give one specific reason why it is good. Use correct articles and avoid filler words like 'well' at the start.

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers are experienced and the campus has quiet study areas that help me concentrate.

建議: Respond naturally and correct verb forms: say whether you would like changes and give a specific reason or a minor improvement you'd accept. Avoid absolute negatives without explanation.

範例: I wouldn't change much because the learning environment is supportive, though I would appreciate longer library opening hours for exam preparation.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and then add specific details: which country, what course, and a brief reason. Use correct infinitive form ('to study').

範例: My future plan is to study abroad, preferably in Australia, where I hope to enroll in an engineering degree to gain practical experience and global exposure.

× IN2025I completed my 12 class and now I want to pursue my higher education from abroad.

✓ I completed my 12th class and now I want to pursue my higher education abroad.

The sentence has past tense 'completed' which is fine, but needs corrections: add ordinal indicator '12th' and include 'th' to form '12th class'; remove 'IN2025I' (appears to be a typo) and use 'abroad' without 'from'. Suggestion: write 'I completed my 12th class and now I want to pursue my higher education abroad.'

× I'm studying in Chidwala.

✓ I study in Chidwala.

The question 'Where do you study?' calls for simple present. 'I'm studying' (present continuous) is acceptable for ongoing temporary action but the expected answer is simple present 'I study in Chidwala.' Use simple present to state regular place of study.

× Well, yes, it's good place.

✓ Well, yes, it's a good place.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'good place'. Use 'a good place.'

× No, I do not make any changes because it's good place.

✓ No, I would not make any changes because it's a good place.

The original uses present simple 'do not make' which is unnatural when answering 'Would you like the place... to make any changes?' A conditional/modal answer with 'would' is appropriate: 'I would not make any changes.' Also add article 'a' before 'good place.'

× My future plan is study abroad.

✓ My future plan is to study abroad.

After 'plan is' the verb should be in the infinitive form with 'to': 'to study.' Missing 'to' causes incorrect sentence structure. Use 'My future plan is to study abroad.'