学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且相关，但有语法与表达不够自然之处，且细节可以更具体。建议：1) 避免重复和不必要的大写简称（如“COM” 若非正式应解释）；2) 用一到两句概括主旨（topic sentence），随后给出具体原因或例子；3) 控制在不超过5句，注意时态和词汇搭配（e.g. “I chose this major because I’m interested in international trade and how companies operate abroad.”）。

範例: I'm a student in Hangzhou majoring in International Business. I chose this major because I'm interested in international trade and want to learn how companies expand into foreign markets. For example, I enjoyed a module on cross-border marketing which showed me practical strategies firms use to enter new countries.

建議: 回答含有许多停顿、重复和未完成句子，影响流利度与清晰度。建议：1) 开门见山给出主题句（e.g. “I usually study in the library.”）；2) 使用连接词组织支持细节（e.g. “because… Moreover…”）；3) 避免口头填充词（uh, um）和重复；4) 给出具体例子说明为何有利（如安静、资源、学习小组）。

範例: I usually study in the university library because it's quiet and has lots of academic books and online resources. Moreover, I sometimes study there with a friend so we can discuss difficult topics and keep each other focused.

建議: 回答清晰且相关，但句子略长、有小语法错误和重复。建议：1) 用一到两句表达观点并用连接词组织细节；2) 修正冠词和单复数（e.g. “a really good place”, “resources here”）；3) 增加一两个具体例子提高说服力（如特定设施或服务）。

範例: Yes, it's a really good place to study because it's quiet and helps me concentrate. I can also borrow specialized books and use study rooms and databases, which makes my research much easier.

建議: 回答表达意图明确但有语法与词序错误，且有重复词。建议：1) 使用简洁句式直接回答（e.g. “Not really, but I would like…”）；2) 注意形容词比较与定冠词（e.g. “the biggest change”）；3) 提供具体改进建议并解释原因；4) 控制在不超过5句。

範例: Not really, but the main change I'd like is an improved cafeteria. If the cafeteria offered more international and healthy options, it would be more convenient for international students and encourage healthier eating.

建議: 回答内容有明确目标，但语法和表达不够准确，细节不够具体。建议：1) 开始用主题句说明计划（e.g. “I plan to obtain professional certificates related to my major.”）；2) 用连接词解释原因并给出具体证书或时间表；3) 修正词组和搭配（e.g. “certificates relevant to my major”, “increase my job opportunities”）。

範例: I plan to obtain professional certificates related to International Business, such as a certificate in international trade or supply chain management. These qualifications will help me update my skills and increase my job opportunities after graduation.

× And in libraries there are many uh, resource and uh, books.

✓ And in libraries there are many resources and books.

此句中 resource 應為複數 resources，因為前面說的是“many”（許多），many後需接可數名詞的複數形式。建議記住 many 後面跟複數可數名詞，若要表示不可數名詞應使用 much。

× What's more, I think uh started with my friend is very.

✓ What's more, I think starting to study with my friend was very helpful.

原句結構不完整且語意不明。需要用動名詞短語 starting to study with my friend 作主語部分，並補全形容詞（如 helpful）來表達完整意思。建議練習使用動名詞或不定式作主語或賓語，並確保句子有完整謂語和賓語。

× Yes, it's really good place to study because it's quiet and helps me concentrate and I can borrow some books I need in libraries and use some resources in here.

✓ Yes, it's a really good place to study because it's quiet and helps me concentrate. I can borrow the books I need from the library and use some resources there.

句中缺少不定冠詞 a（a really good place），且庫館單數表達應用 the library（特指學生常去的圖書館），borrow...from 用法更自然；in here 不地道，應用 there。建議注意冠詞用法（a/the）和固定介詞搭配（borrow from, resources there）。

× If there will have more international food and healthy food, it will more better and that's all.

✓ If there were more international and healthy food in the cafeteria, it would be better, and that's all.

條件句中不應使用 "there will have" 這種結構。對與假設情況應用虛擬語氣（If there were ... , it would ...）。此外 more better 為重複比較，應直接用 better。建議學習第一、二、三類條件句及常見比較級用法。

× If there will have more international food and healthy food, it will more better and that's all.

✓ If there were more international and healthy food in the cafeteria, it would be better, and that's all.

句中使用 more better 是錯誤的雙重比較，better 已為比較級，不需再加 more。請注意形容詞比較級的正確形式：使用 -er 或 more（但不要同時使用）。

× I study in libraries, uh, because I think it's a good place for me to focus focus.

✓ I study in the library because I think it's a good place for me to focus.

習慣上表示就讀或用作學習的圖書館應使用單數 the library（特指一個常去的圖書館），並且 focus 重複了。建議注意介詞與冠詞搭配，及避免重複詞語。

× I want to get more professional certificates which relevant my major because I think it's the way I can update my skills and I will have more job chance for my.

✓ I want to get more professional certificates which are relevant to my major because I think it's the way I can update my skills and I will have more job opportunities.

句中 certificates 後面需有關係子句 which are relevant to my major（補上動詞和介詞 to）；job chance 用法不地道，應為 job opportunities（複數）。建議注意關係子句結構以及常用名詞搭配（job opportunities）。

× I want to get more professional certificates which relevant my major because I think it's the way I can update my skills and I will have more job chance for my.

✓ I want to get more professional certificates which are relevant to my major because I think it's the way I can update my skills and I will have more job opportunities.

句尾的 for my 不完整且不必要，應刪除。原句缺少關係代詞後的動詞 are 並需搭配介詞 to。建議檢查代詞與介詞短語是否完整及位置正確。

× I'm a student in Hangzhou and my major is International Business. I choose this because I'm interested in international trade and how COM company operates abroad.

✓ I'm a student in Hangzhou and my major is International Business. I chose this because I'm interested in international trade and how the COM company operates abroad.

動詞時態 choose 應為過去式 chose（選擇已發生）；此外 company 前通常需加定冠詞 the（當指特定公司時）。建議注意時態一致性及冠詞用法。

× I choose this because I'm interested in international trade and how COM company operates abroad.

✓ I chose this because I'm interested in international trade and how the COM company operates abroad.

表示選擇專業這一動作已在過去發生，應使用過去式 chose 而不是現在式 choose。建議根據語境區分現在和過去時，特別是描述已完成的決定或行為時使用過去式。

× I can borrow some books I need in libraries and use some resources in here.

✓ I can borrow the books I need from the library and use some resources there.

borrow 後常用介詞 from 指從哪裡借；in libraries（復數）和 in here 用法不自然，應改為 the library 和 there。建議熟悉常見動詞與介詞的搭配，如 borrow from, study at/in the library。

× And in libraries there are many uh, resource and uh, books.

✓ In libraries there are many resources and books.

句首的 and 非必要且打斷語流，且填詞 uh 應刪除。雖然這更多是語篇流暢問題，但會影響語序和清晰度。建議在正式回答中避免使用填充詞並注意語序。

× I study in libraries, uh, because I think it's a good place for me to focus focus.

✓ I study in the library because I think it's a good place for me to focus.

原句中重複 focus 且語序有小問題。簡化句子結構能使表達更自然。建議說話時使用完整句子並避免重複。