学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 発音と文法の誤りを直し、情報を明確に整理する練習をしましょう。例えば“sale”はおそらく“small”や“children aged”の誤り、語順や冠詞の間違い（a nursery assistant / a two-year-old class）を修正する必要があります。答えは直接の主題文を先に述べ、次に年齢や職務の具体例を1〜2文で補足すると自然です。短く簡潔に保ち、冗長な表現を避けてください。

範例: I work as a nursery assistant at an Edinburgh Council nursery. I look after a class of two-year-old children. They are very cute and usually have positive attitudes, which makes my job enjoyable.

建議: 文法と語順を改善し、固有名詞や表現の間違いを避ける必要があります。例えば“in my university”より“at university”や“at my university”が自然です。“I my major is English”は“I’m majoring in English”などに直します。“Arthur County”は不明瞭なら説明するか正しい名称にするべきです。短くはっきりと答え、1〜2の具体例（クラスや交流の相手）を加えてください。

範例: I study at a university in Japan, where I am majoring in English. I often have opportunities to speak English with international students and visiting teachers.

建議: 冠詞や複数形、時制の誤りを直しましょう（the my university → my university、have → has、opportunity → opportunities）。理由を述べるときは接続語を使い、具体例を一つ加えると説得力が増します。また動詞の形（improve → to improve）に注意してください。

範例: Yes, it is. My university has many overseas students, so I often get opportunities to speak English with them, which really helps me improve my speaking skills.

建議: 表現を簡潔にし、否定と肯定が混在しないように明確に答えましょう。'It's very difficult quest for me' は意味が不明なので避け、代わりに'I don't think any changes are necessary'のように言います。主語と動詞の一致、不要な句読点を直し、理由を一つ簡潔に述べてください。日本語での具体的改善点：主語を明確にし、'need to' の使用法を正す。

範例: No, I wouldn't. I think my university is already well organized and offers good support for international students, so I don't feel any major changes are necessary.

建議: 語彙の誤り（prank → plan、codified → certified or qualified）と文の断片化を直す必要があります。将来計画は明確な主題文で始め、資格の状況や次のステップ（勉強、試験、研修）を具体的に述べましょう。また時制と冠詞の使い方に注意してください。

範例: My future study plan is to become a certified nursery teacher in Scotland. I am already qualified in Japan, but I need to complete the local certification process in Scotland to work there.

× My class is sale to two years old baby class.

✓ My class is for two-year-old babies.

The sentence has plural and noun-modifier errors. Use plural 'babies' for more than one child and hyphenate 'two-year-old' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Also 'sale' is incorrect; use 'for' to indicate suitability or purpose. Suggestion: write 'My class is for two-year-old babies.'

× They are very cute and positive.

✓ They are very cute and cheerful.

'Positive' is grammatically acceptable but sounds unnatural for describing babies; 'cheerful' or 'happy' is more idiomatic. The present tense 'are' is correct. Suggestion: choose a more natural adjective like 'cheerful.'

× I study in Japan in my university.

✓ I study at a university in Japan.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'university' when indicating the place of study. Also word order is more natural as 'a university in Japan.' Suggestion: say 'I study at a university in Japan.'

× I my major is English.

✓ My major is English.

This sentence contains an extra pronoun 'I' causing structure error. Remove the redundant 'I' to form the correct subject-predicate structure: 'My major is English.'

× I got a lot of chance to talk with Arthur County.

✓ I had a lot of chances to talk with other country people.

Multiple issues: 'got' is past but context likely present/past experience—'had' is acceptable; 'a lot of chance' should be 'a lot of chances' or 'many opportunities.' 'Arthur County' appears to be wrong words—likely 'other countries' or 'people from other countries.' Suggestion: 'I had many opportunities to talk with people from other countries.'

× Yes, it is because the my university have some overseas student so I have opportunity speak with them in English.

✓ Yes, it is because my university has some overseas students, so I have the opportunity to speak with them in English.

Remove the extra article 'the' before 'my university.' Subject-verb agreement: 'university' (singular) requires 'has' not 'have.' 'Some overseas student' needs plural 'students.' 'Have opportunity speak' needs 'have the opportunity to speak.' Suggestions: correct articles, verb form, plurals, and add 'to' before the verb.

× It's really good improve my English.

✓ It really helps improve my English.

'Auxiliary it is' plus infinitive is incorrect here. Use 'helps' (present simple) to express general truth and 'improve' stays as infinitive after 'helps.' Alternatively 'It's really good for improving my English.' Suggestion: use 'helps improve' or 'is good for improving.'

× It's very difficult quest for me, but I don't want, I think my university, they don't need to any change.

✓ It's a very difficult question for me, but I don't want any changes; I think my university doesn't need to make any changes.

Several structure errors: 'quest' should be 'question.' Remove extra commas and redundant pronoun 'they.' Use 'doesn't need to make any changes' for correct negation and infinitive structure. Also 'I don't want' needs an object — 'I don't want any changes.' Suggestions: correct word choice, remove redundancy, and fix verb form for third person singular.

× They are perfect, so.

✓ They are perfect.

Trailing 'so' is unnecessary and informal here. The present tense 'are' is correct. Suggestion: simply state 'They are perfect.'

× My future study prank is.

✓ My future study plan is:

'Prank' is incorrect word choice; should be 'plan.' The sentence is incomplete; use a colon or complete clause. Suggestion: 'My future study plan is:' followed by the plan.

× Become a codified nursery teacher in Scotland.

✓ I want to become a qualified nursery teacher in Scotland.

Sentence fragment missing subject and auxiliary. 'Codified' is wrong word choice; likely 'qualified.' Add subject 'I want to' to complete sentence and correct adjective. Suggestion: 'I want to become a qualified nursery teacher in Scotland.'

× I hope I'm qualified in Japan but I don't have.

✓ I hope I'm qualified in Japan, but I don't have the qualification.

The clause 'I don't have' is incomplete—what is missing is the object 'the qualification' or 'the necessary qualification.' Also punctuation: add comma before 'but.' Suggestion: 'I hope I'm qualified in Japan, but I don't have the necessary qualification.'