学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 答题要直接且时态准确。你应使用简单明了的句子回答当前状态，然后补充过去经历。避免多余语气词（如“Well”或“uh”）和语法错误（如时态和搭配）。可把过去经历和现在状态分成两句，并用连接词自然衔接。

範例: I used to work as an engineer for about three years, but at the moment I am looking for a new job. My engineering experience has given me strong problem-solving skills, which I hope to use in my next role.

建議: 回答要直接说明地点并保证语法正确。地点表达应使用“in”或“at”恰当，省去多余停顿词。说明不喜欢的原因时要具体并用连词连接观点与原因。

範例: I study in Nanjing, which is in the south of China. I don't particularly like the city because the summers are very hot and humid, which makes it uncomfortable to walk around.

建議: 先直接回答问题，然后提供具体支持细节并使用连词。注意名词单复数和冠词（e.g. many students），以及时态一致。可以举例说明朋友如何帮助你。

範例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study. There are many international students at my university, and I have made several friends who study with me and share notes, which has helped me improve my grades.

建議: 回答应更具体地说明想要的改变并解释原因。避免笼统的表达（如“more convenient”）而不给出例子。使用条件句或原因说明会更有说服力。

範例: Yes, I would like the campus to be more convenient. For example, adding more shuttle buses and longer library opening hours would make it easier for students to travel and study, especially during exam periods.

建議: 回答应简洁且逻辑清楚。去掉填充词，使用正确的短语（e.g. "do a master's degree" or "get a master's degree"），并具体说明专业和学习计划的细节（例如研究方向或目标）。保持句子不超过五句。

範例: I plan to go to the UK to do a master's degree in mechanical engineering. There I hope to focus on advanced manufacturing techniques and gain practical experience through internships to prepare for an engineering career.

× Well, I had worked as an engineer for about 3 years in the past, but now I'm looking forward a job.

✓ Well, I worked as an engineer for about three years in the past, but now I'm looking for a job.

句子中使用了過去完成式 "had worked"，但語境只是敘述過去經歷且沒有與另一個過去時間點比較，應使用一般過去式 "worked"。另外短語應為 "look for a job"（尋找工作），不是 "look forward a job"。建議：描述單純過去經歷時使用一般過去式；記住固定搭配 "look for" 表示尋找。

× Well, I study at the Nanjing city which in the South of China, Uh, but I don't like that city because it is too hot.

✓ Well, I study in Nanjing, which is in the south of China, but I don't like that city because it is too hot.

原句中誤用介詞和地名表達：英語中通常說 "study in [city]" 而不是 "study at the Nanjing city"；"which in the South of China" 缺少動詞，且方向詞不用大寫（除專有名詞外），應為 "which is in the south of China"。建議：地點前用 in 表示在某城市；定語從句需有動詞；方位詞小寫。

× There are so many UH student in my university and I make friends with them.

✓ There are so many students at my university and I make friends with them.

原句中 "student" 應為複數 "students" 以呼應 "so many"（許多）；同時常用介詞為 "at my university" 而非 "in my university"（兩者都可，但常見為 at）。建議：遇到 "many/so many" 等修飾詞時使用複數名詞。

× They helped me a lot in my study.

✓ They helped me a lot with my studies.

此處原句用詞可被視為搭配不自然。雖然語法上過去式 "helped" 與 "in my study" 並非嚴重錯誤，但更自然的表達是 "helped me a lot with my studies" 或 "helped me a lot in my studies"。建議：用常見搭配 "help someone with something"，study 用複數或用 "my studies" 表示學習過程。

× Yes, I hope it become more and more convenient for us. It is better for everyone.

✓ Yes, I hope it becomes more and more convenient for us. It would be better for everyone.

"hope" 後接的從句主語是 "it"，謂語需用第三人稱單數 "becomes"，原句漏用了 -s。第二句語氣更自然可用條件式 "would be better" 表示假設或願望。建議：主語為第三人稱單數時動詞加 -s；表達願望或假設時可用 would。

× Oh well, I want to go to the UK to read, to study, uh, to get my master degree, umm, in that degree, uh, I will study the more, more mechanical.

✓ Oh well, I want to go to the UK to study for my master's degree. In that program, I will study more mechanical engineering.

原句中多處表達不自然和時態/詞類問題："to read" 在英式英語可指學習但在這裡不必要，常說 "study for my master's degree"；"master degree" 應為 "master's degree"（所有格）；"I will study the more, more mechanical" 語序和詞語不正確，應明確為 "I will study more mechanical engineering" 或 "I will study more about mechanics"。建議：使用固定表達 "study for a master's degree"；專業名詞如 mechanical engineering 用完整形式；簡潔地表達學習內容。