学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和不准确的表达。例如，“I'm studying flying university”表达不清，应明确学校名称。

範例: I'm a student majoring in Risk Management and Insurance at Fudan University.

建議: 回答简洁明了，但可以稍作扩展，增加细节使回答更丰富。

範例: I study at Fudan University, which is one of the top universities in China.

建議: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且重复。应直接表达观点并用具体理由支持。

範例: Yes, I think it's a good place to study because it has excellent facilities and a supportive learning environment.

建議: 回答缺乏逻辑和连贯性，表达不完整。应明确表达观点并用连词连接句子。

範例: No, I wouldn't like any changes because I enjoy the current environment and have favorite spots to study.

建議: 回答不完整且含糊，语法错误较多。应完整表达计划并避免重复。

範例: This is my final year at Fudan University. After graduation, I plan to pursue a master's degree at the University of Hong Kong, and then I hope to start a career in my field.

× I'm a student and my subject is the management of risk and insurance and I'm studying flying university.

✓ I'm a student and my subject is the management of risk and insurance and I'm studying at Flying University.

在英语中，表示在某个学校学习时，通常需要使用介词'at'。原句中缺少介词'at'，导致表达不完整。建议在'studying'后加上'at'，使句子更符合英语习惯。

× I study in Fudan University.

✓ I study at Fudan University.

表示在某个具体学校学习时，英语中通常使用介词'at'而不是'in'。原句中使用了'in'，不符合习惯用法。建议将'in'改为'at'。

× because there is a lot of lot of places you can study,

✓ because there are a lot of places you can study,

'places'是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数形式'is'。此外，'a lot of'重复出现，应去掉一个。建议将'is'改为'are'，并删除重复的'a lot of'。

× but I think they are not bigger, they are not enough big and you don't have a lot of choice.

✓ but I think they are not bigger, they are not big enough and you don't have a lot of choices.

'enough'修饰形容词时应放在形容词后面，故应为'big enough'。此外，'choice'表示选择时通常用复数形式'choices'。建议调整词序并将'choice'改为'choices'。

× No, absolutely no. I don't like change. I like some places I never change. I can sit, sit down some places I like most and uh.

✓ No, absolutely not. I don't like change. I like some places and I never change them. I can sit down in some places I like most and uh.

'No'后面应使用副词'not'来否定句子。'I like some places I never change'缺少连接词，应改为'I like some places and I never change them'，且需要用宾格代词'them'。'sit down'后应加介词'in'表示在某处坐下。建议做以上修改。

× Uh, this is the last year I am in flannel university and after this I want to go to Hong Kong University to, uh, attend a master program.

✓ Uh, this is the last year I am at Flannel University and after this I want to go to Hong Kong University to, uh, attend a master's program.

学校名称应首字母大写，且应使用正确的介词'at'。'master program'应为所有格形式'master's program'。建议修改学校名称首字母和介词，及'master program'为'master's program'。

× And when we finish, when I finished that, I want to become.

✓ And when I finish that, I want to become.

句中时态应保持一致，前半句用一般现在时'finish'，后半句用一般现在时'want'，故应将'finished'改为'finish'。此外，'we finish'与后文主语'I'不一致，应统一为'I finish'。建议修改为'when I finish that'。