学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "My major help me" nên là "My major helps me". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết.

範例: I am a student at Finn University, majoring in Marketing. I have been studying here for five years, and I believe my major will open up many job opportunities for me in the future.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "Earth when university" không rõ nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói "I study at a university called Earth when" hoặc tên khác. Ngoài ra, câu nên có cấu trúc đúng và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I study at Earth University, which is about five kilometers from my house. I chose this university because it is modern and offers high-quality education.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "it offer" nên là "it offers". Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về các cơ hội và kỹ năng bạn có thể cải thiện, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

範例: I think it is a good place to study because it offers many opportunities to improve my skills, especially my English. Moreover, the environment is supportive and helps me learn effectively.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "it it" và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn, ví dụ "offers" thay vì "offer". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn muốn học ở nước ngoài.

範例: If I had the chance, I would like to study abroad because it offers high-quality education and more job opportunities. Additionally, studying abroad would help me improve my personal image and experience.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về kế hoạch học tập tương lai, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "English course" nên là "an English course" và "try more time to" không rõ nghĩa.

範例: After graduating from university, I plan to take an English course to pass the next level of the language test. I will also dedicate more time to practicing my English skills.

× My major help me more job opportunities in the future.

✓ My major helps me get more job opportunities in the future.

The subject 'major' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular). Also, 'help me more job opportunities' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me get more job opportunities' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I study Earth when university which is about 5 kilometers from my house.

✓ I study at Earthwen University, which is about 5 kilometers from my house.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'at' before the university name and has a typo in 'Earth when' which should be 'Earthwen'. Also, a comma is needed before the relative clause 'which is about 5 kilometers from my house' to separate it properly.

× I choose this university because it is a modern and have high quality of education.

✓ I chose this university because it is modern and has a high quality of education.

The verb tense should be past tense 'chose' to match the context. 'Modern' is an adjective and does not need 'a' before it. The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'a high quality of education' is the correct phrase.

× I think it is a good place to study because it offer many opportunities to improve my skill and is easier improve my English skills and get.

✓ I think it is a good place to study because it offers many opportunities to improve my skills and it is easier to improve my English skills and get better.

The verb 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context. The phrase 'is easier improve' is missing 'to' and the sentence is incomplete; adding 'to improve' and completing the thought improves clarity.

× If I have a chance, I would like to study abroad because it it has a high quality of education and offer more job opportunities.

✓ If I have a chance, I would like to study abroad because it has a high quality of education and offers more job opportunities.

The modal verb 'would like' is correctly used. The repeated 'it' is a typo and should be removed. The verb 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Moreover, it improves my image.

✓ Moreover, it improves my image.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× After studying at the university, I will take part in English course to pass this step test and I will try more time to.

✓ After studying at the university, I will take part in an English course to pass this step test and I will try harder.

The phrase 'English course' needs the article 'an'. The phrase 'try more time to' is incomplete and unclear; 'try harder' is a clearer expression of effort in the future tense.