学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer should be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and clarify your points. For example, mention clearly what you are studying and where, using correct tenses.

範例: I am currently an O Level student, which I started in 2023. I study at Thomas and IMA institutions.

建議: Try to make your answer more coherent and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

範例: I prefer studying at home because it is close to my parents, and I don't have to travel outside. For me, home is the best place to study.

建議: Your answer should be more structured and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your reasons and describe the environment clearly with correct vocabulary.

範例: Yes, home is a very good place to study because I save time by not traveling, and I can concentrate better in a comfortable and quiet environment.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, correct singular/plural forms and sentence flow will help.

範例: Yes, I would like to make some changes at home. I study in the drawing room, so I plan to buy a comfortable chair and table. Also, I want to lock the door to avoid disturbances.

建議: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use conditional sentences properly and clarify your plans with correct vocabulary.

範例: My future plan is to become a lawyer. Therefore, I will pursue a Bachelor's degree in Law from London, and I am currently preparing for the Law course.

× I am a student of O level which I will started in 2023 and I am currently doing my study in Thomas and IMA student.

✓ I am a student of O level which I will start in 2023 and I am currently studying at Thomas and I am an IMA student.

The phrase 'I will started' is incorrect because 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. The correct form is 'will start'. Also, 'doing my study' is better expressed as 'studying'. Additionally, 'I am an IMA student' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I am currently doing my study in Thomas and IMA student.

✓ I am currently studying at Thomas and I am an IMA student.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to studying at an institution; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, 'doing my study' is better expressed as 'studying'.

× I study at home with those I prefer to be at home every time and for me the best place to study is home.

✓ I study at home because I prefer to be at home all the time and for me, the best place to study is home.

The phrase 'with those' is unclear and incorrect here. It should be replaced with 'because I' to express the reason. Also, 'every time' is better expressed as 'all the time' in this context.

× And I used to study at home because it's near to our parents and we do not have to go outside the house to do a study.

✓ And I used to study at home because it's near our parents and we do not have to go outside the house to study.

The preposition 'near to' is incorrect; 'near' should be used without 'to'. Also, 'do a study' is better expressed as 'study'.

× Yes, home is a very good place to study as we do not have to travel anywhere and I can save time and concentrate better on my study and it is a good place to study as comfortable and the white environment. To study.

✓ Yes, home is a very good place to study because we do not have to travel anywhere, I can save time, concentrate better on my studies, and it is a comfortable place with a quiet environment to study.

The phrase 'as comfortable and the white environment' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'a comfortable place with a quiet environment'. Also, 'concentrate better on my study' should be 'concentrate better on my studies'.

× Yes, home is a very good place to study as we do not have to travel anywhere and I can save time and concentrate better on my study and it is a good place to study as comfortable and the white environment. To study.

✓ Yes, home is a very good place to study because we do not have to travel anywhere, I can save time, concentrate better on my studies, and it is a comfortable place with a quiet environment to study.

The sentence uses 'and' excessively and awkwardly. Using 'because' and commas improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Yes, I like to make change. It is at home where I study.

✓ Yes, I would like to make some changes. It is at home where I study.

'Make change' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make some changes'. Also, 'would like' is more polite and appropriate for expressing desires.

× I study at my drawing room, so I think I have to buy some chairs and table to study comfortably and lock the door.

✓ I study in my drawing room, so I think I have to buy some chairs and a table to study comfortably and lock the door.

The preposition 'at' should be 'in' when referring to rooms. Also, 'table' needs an article 'a' because it is singular and countable.

× Nobody can disturb me.

✓ Nobody can disturb me.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× My future study plans are if I wanted to be a lawyer so I will pursue my career in law and I will do Bachelors of Law from London as I am preparing for LOW.

✓ My future study plans are that if I want to be a lawyer, I will pursue my career in law and I will do a Bachelor of Laws from London as I am preparing for law.

The phrase 'if I wanted' should be 'if I want' to express a future possibility. 'Bachelors of Law' should be 'Bachelor of Laws'. Also, 'LOW' seems to be a typo and should be 'law'.