学习— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you work or are you a student?
考生
I'm a student now and I'm just one year before the biggest test, which is GAO Cow, a national exam that determines which university I will be admitted to.
考官
Where do you study?
考生
I studied in a Senior High School in my hometown and it was a old school but the teachers are all very kind in it and I found the we plant a lot of trees in our school that make the vibe very cozy and warm.
考官
Is it a good place to study?
考生
Yes, I think it is a good place to study because it provides a lot of high quality laboratories and we have a really big playground we can run in, run in the lens and play the football in the field. So I think the infrastructure were very good.
考官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
考生
I found that the biggest problem is the dishes in the canteen. They are really not a good taste and sometimes we will we would haven't to have not to eat anything because it's already sold, sold out. So I want you to add more.
考官
What are your future study plans?
考生
Oh, I wanted to go to the North European countries to have my university study because I love the environment in here in there. So I need to prepare for the ice test and also the local language test and when to there to enjoy.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁明了地表达身份和考试的重要性。
範例: I'm currently a student, and I'm preparing for the GAO Kao, a national exam that will decide which university I can attend.
Where do you study?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答应注意时态一致，句子结构清晰，避免语法错误。描述时应更具体，表达更自然。
範例: I study at a senior high school in my hometown. Although the school is old, the teachers are very kind, and the many trees on campus create a cozy and warm atmosphere.
Is it a good place to study?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中应避免重复和语法错误，使用连接词使句子更连贯，描述更具体。
範例: Yes, it's a good place to study because it has many high-quality laboratories. Moreover, the large playground allows us to run and play football, so the infrastructure is excellent.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答应更简洁，避免语法错误和重复，表达清晰具体。可以用连接词使表达更流畅。
範例: I think the biggest problem is the canteen food. It doesn't taste good, and sometimes the dishes sell out quickly, so I hope they can offer more variety and quantity.
What are your future study plans?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答应注意时态一致，句子结构清晰，避免语法错误，表达更自然具体。
範例: I plan to study at a university in Northern Europe because I love the environment there. Therefore, I need to prepare for the IELTS and the local language tests before I go.
文法
× I studied in a Senior High School in my hometown and it was a old school but the teachers are all very kind in it and I found the we plant a lot of trees in our school that make the vibe very cozy and warm.
✓ I studied in a Senior High School in my hometown and it was an old school but the teachers are all very kind in it and I found that we plant a lot of trees in our school that make the vibe very cozy and warm.
“a old school”中，old以元音音素开头，应该用不定冠词“an”而不是“a”。此外，句中缺少连词“that”连接主句和从句。
× So I think the infrastructure were very good.
✓ So I think the infrastructure was very good.
“infrastructure”是不可数名词，作为单数使用，谓语动词应使用单数形式“was”。
× sometimes we will we would haven't to have not to eat anything because it's already sold, sold out.
✓ sometimes we would have to not eat anything because it's already sold out.
“will we would haven't to have not to”结构混乱，正确表达应为“would have to not”，表示不得不不做某事。
× I found the we plant a lot of trees in our school that make the vibe very cozy and warm.
✓ I found that we plant a lot of trees in our school that make the vibe very cozy and warm.
句中缺少连词“that”，导致句子结构不完整。
× I love the environment in here in there.
✓ I love the environment there.
“in here in there”重复且用法错误，应简化为“there”表示“那里”。
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