学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details without repetition or hesitation. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure correct grammar, for example, use 'economics' instead of 'economic'.

範例: I am a student currently studying commerce. My favorite subject is economics because I find topics like scarcity and the problems faced by people very interesting. I have learned several important concepts related to these topics.

建議: Your answer does not directly address the question about the place where you study. Focus on answering the question first, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, improve sentence clarity and grammar.

範例: I usually study in my room at home. I prefer to study there because it is quiet and comfortable. I often study for two to three hours in the evening when I feel motivated.

建議: Your answer is positive but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Also, correct grammar such as 'I like to study in that place' instead of 'I like to do study in the that place'.

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study because I feel relaxed and calm there. Therefore, I can concentrate better and study effectively.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a topic sentence, then use linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' properly. Also, use correct phrases such as 'put sticky notes' instead of 'pay through sticky notes'.

範例: Yes, I would like to make some changes to my study place. Firstly, I want to put sticky notes on the wall with motivational quotes. Secondly, I would like to add star-shaped lights because they look beautiful and help me feel calm.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details. Avoid unclear phrases like 'do the big home' and 'bannership'.

範例: In the future, I plan to continue my studies by taking courses related to business. I want to learn how to start a business and understand the role of leadership in business success.

× I'm a student, I'm studying great world.

✓ I'm a student, I'm studying the great world.

The adjective 'great' needs the definite article 'the' before it to specify the noun 'world'. Without 'the', the phrase is grammatically incorrect.

× My favorite subject is economic, which, uh, which uh, I like the topics scarcities and the problem faced by the peoples.

✓ My favorite subject is economics, and I like the topics of scarcity and the problems faced by people.

The subject 'economic' should be 'economics' as a field of study. 'Scarcities' should be singular 'scarcity' when referring to the general concept. 'Peoples' is plural for ethnic groups; here, 'people' is correct for general population. Also, 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match 'topics'.

× And I also known some features about that topic.

✓ And I also know some features about that topic.

The verb 'known' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb. Here, the simple present 'know' is correct to match the present tense context.

× I study often two or three hours a night and sometime in evening or two and I like to do study when I feel very happy and I also learned every topic very easily.

✓ I often study two or three hours a night and sometimes in the evening or two, and I like to study when I feel very happy. I also learn every topic very easily.

The adverb 'often' should come before the verb 'study'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'In evening' needs the article 'the'. 'Do study' is incorrect; 'study' alone suffices. 'Learned' should be present tense 'learn' to match the ongoing context.

× Yes, it is a good place to study and I feel very relaxed and calm and I do the study very properly in manner and I like to do study in the that place.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study, and I feel very relaxed and calm. I study very properly and in a good manner, and I like to study in that place.

'Do the study' is incorrect; 'study' alone is correct. 'In manner' needs an article and adjective: 'in a good manner'. 'Do study' should be 'study'. 'The that place' is incorrect; 'that place' suffices.

× The place where you study to make any changes.

✓ Would you like to make any changes to the place where you study?

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. The corrected sentence forms a proper question matching the examiner's prompt.

× Yes, I want to make a changes where I study.

✓ Yes, I want to make some changes where I study.

'A changes' is incorrect because 'changes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. 'Some' is the correct quantifier for plural nouns.

× Firstly, I want to pay through sticky notes on the wall and on the sticky notes I want to write some motivate thoughts.

✓ Firstly, I want to put up sticky notes on the wall, and on the sticky notes, I want to write some motivational thoughts.

'Pay through' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'put up' for placing notes. 'Motivate thoughts' should be 'motivational thoughts' as an adjective-noun phrase.

× Secondly, I want to paste the stars light and uh, it's look very beautiful and I feel calm.

✓ Secondly, I want to paste star lights, and they look very beautiful, and I feel calm.

'Stars light' should be 'star lights' (plural noun). 'It's look' is incorrect; 'they look' matches the plural subject. 'Paste' is acceptable here meaning to stick or attach.

× The future study plans that I want to do the big home and I'm also do the course about the business woman and how to start the business and what's the bannership does banner sheets are in the business.

✓ My future study plans are to do a big home project, and I also want to do a course about businesswomen, how to start a business, and what the partnership is in business.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Do the big home' is unclear; 'do a big home project' is clearer. 'I'm also do' should be 'I also want to do'. 'Business woman' should be 'businesswomen' or 'businesswoman' depending on singular/plural. 'Bannership' and 'banner sheets' are incorrect; likely meant 'partnership'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.