学习— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you work or are you a student?
考生
I'm currently a student and I'm in grade 11 at a local school in Shanghai.
考官
Where do you study?
考生
Umm, right now I'm studying in uh, Yampur area in Shanghai and umm, before I was studying in Sichuan Chengdu in a International School.
考官
Is it a good place to study?
考生
Umm to be honest, I think it is a great place to study because our school focuses mainly on art which perfectly suit my interests and however, the environment UMM here is very quiet and very comfortable, helping me concentrate better in my work.
考官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
考生
Umm, to say the truth, I will like the place to have a change if that's umm I wish the places can be bigger because our school is really small and umm actually we don't have enough.
考官
What are your future study plans?
考生
Actually, I don't, umm, I don't know right now, but uh, in the future I may go to England and go to an art college.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
分數: 85.0建議: 回答较为自然且直接，但可以更简洁，避免重复信息。
範例: I'm a grade 11 student at a local school in Shanghai.
Where do you study?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答中有较多犹豫词，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用连词使句子更连贯。
範例: I currently study in the Yampur area of Shanghai, but previously I attended an international school in Chengdu, Sichuan.
Is it a good place to study?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答内容丰富，但表达不够流畅，连接词使用不当。建议使用恰当的连接词，避免重复和犹豫词。
範例: I think it's a great place to study because the school focuses mainly on art, which suits my interests perfectly. Moreover, the quiet and comfortable environment helps me concentrate better.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答不完整且含糊，缺少具体细节。建议明确表达愿望并补充具体原因。
範例: I would like the school to be bigger because currently it is quite small, and we don't have enough space for all the students.
What are your future study plans?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答中有较多犹豫词，表达不够自信。建议简洁明确地表达计划，并适当补充理由。
範例: I am not sure yet, but I plan to study art in England at a college because I want to improve my skills and gain international experience.
文法
× before I was studying in Sichuan Chengdu in a International School.
✓ before I was studying in Sichuan Chengdu in an International School.
在以元音音素开头的单词前应使用不定冠词'an'，而不是'a'。这里'International'以元音音素开头，故应使用'an'。
× our school focuses mainly on art which perfectly suit my interests
✓ our school focuses mainly on art which perfectly suits my interests
主语是单数'school'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'suits'，以保持主谓一致。
× which perfectly suit my interests
✓ which perfectly suits my interests
关系代词'which'指代单数名词'art'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'suits'，保持主谓一致。
× and however, the environment UMM here is very quiet and very comfortable, helping me concentrate better in my work.
✓ however, the environment here is very quiet and very comfortable, helping me concentrate better in my work.
'and however'连用不合适，应去掉'and'，直接使用转折连词'however'。
× I will like the place to have a change if that's umm I wish the places can be bigger because our school is really small
✓ I would like the place to have a change; I wish the place could be bigger because our school is really small
表达愿望时，'would like'比'will like'更合适；'can'应改为表示愿望的虚拟语气'could'。
× I wish the places can be bigger because our school is really small and umm actually we don't have enough.
✓ I wish the place could be bigger because our school is really small and actually we don't have enough space.
'places'应为单数形式'place'，与前文保持一致；句尾缺少宾语，补充'空间(space)'使句子完整。
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