学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法有些错误，如“allowed me create”应为“allowed me to create”，同时表达可以更自然流畅。建议注意动词不定式的使用，并避免语法错误。

範例: I work as a landscape designer, and I really enjoy my job because it allows me to create comfortable public spaces. I have been working in this field for three years.

建議: 回答简洁明了，但“my college”表达不够具体，且“comfortable public space”应为复数形式。建议使用更具体的表达，并注意名词单复数。

範例: I study at a local college, majoring in environmental design. I chose this major because I want to design comfortable public spaces.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“this technology”应为“its technology”，“experienced teacher”应为“experienced teachers”，且表达不够自然。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用，并使表达更地道。

範例: Of course, this college is very famous for its technology and design programs. Many students choose to study here because it has experienced teachers, which makes learning comfortable.

建議: 回答中有明显语法和拼写错误，如“pray”应为“place”，“lying”应为“lighting”，表达不清晰。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构的练习。

範例: Yes, I would like the place where I study to be more comfortable. For example, if there were better lighting and less noise, I think I could concentrate better and study more effectively.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，如“creating beautiful public space or park”应为“public spaces or parks”，“hope to again experience by walking in the field into my school”表达不自然。建议理清句子结构，使用更准确的表达。

範例: My future study plan is to learn more about landscape design because I am very interested in creating beautiful public spaces and parks. I also hope to gain more practical experience by working in the field alongside my studies.

× I really enjoyed my work because it allowed me create new comfortable public space and I have been working in this field for three years.

✓ I really enjoy my work because it allows me to create new comfortable public spaces and I have been working in this field for three years.

动词 enjoy 后面应使用动词原形或不定式，这里应使用一般现在时 enjoy，因为描述的是现在的感受。allowed 后面缺少 to，正确用法是 allow sb to do sth。public space 应为复数 public spaces，因为指多个公共空间。

× I study at my college. My major is environmental design. I choose this major because I want to design comfortable public space.

✓ I study at my college. My major is environmental design. I chose this major because I want to design comfortable public spaces.

choose 作为过去发生的选择动作，应使用过去时 chose。public space 应为复数 public spaces，表示多个公共空间。

× Of course, this college is very famous for this technology and design programs. Many students choose to study here because it offers experienced teacher which makes learning very comfortable.

✓ Of course, this college is very famous for its technology and design programs. Many students choose to study here because it offers experienced teachers which make learning very comfortable.

this technology 应为 its technology，表示所属关系。teacher 应为复数 teachers，因为指多个教师。which 指代复数 teachers，谓语动词应为 make。

× Yes, I would like to the pray where I study to more comfortable. For example, if there were better lying and less noisy, I think I could concentrate better and study more effectively.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to be more comfortable. For example, if there were better lighting and less noise, I think I could concentrate better and study more effectively.

to the pray 是错误表达，应为 to be。lying 应为 lighting，表示照明。less noisy 应改为 less noise，名词形式更合适。

× My future study plan is to learn more about landscape design knowledge because I'm very interested in creating beautiful public space or park and I hope to again experience by walking in the field into my school.

✓ My future study plan is to learn more about landscape design because I'm very interested in creating beautiful public spaces or parks and I hope to gain more experience by walking in the field near my school.

landscape design knowledge 表达不自然，改为 landscape design。public space or park 应为复数 public spaces or parks。again experience 用法错误，应为 gain more experience。into my school 改为 near my school，更符合语境。